- Chapter 1 part 1 (Writing Sample)
This is my first try at writing anything, its very loosely inspired by an old hungarian story that only i seem to remember, its just a quick sample, part 1 of chapter 1, constructive criticism is appreciated, if you notice, most of the names are taken from
Transformative Works
A good first try." it had not been his first try; he lost count of how many times he had tried. this was simply the first time he'd tried to use mark as an editor. no one else would edit him at this point.
Dirty Dog Done Deep
The dog yipped excitedly as all the fond, slutty memories flooded his haze filled head; thinking back to when he was seventeen and first tried to take even a quarter of the horse cock into his barely trained boy cunt.
The Bad Guy
Here's my first try to write directly in english. as i am not a native speaker, please be indulgent with the (hopefully not so) high amount of mistakes. any help to correct it is welcome.
Noah's Wolves. Chapter 3
“remember when he first tried cheese?" “yeah, he was so scared." the twins chuckled as noah took another bite. the spaghetti was much better.
Rainy Weekend - Friday
The main reason he started cutting himself was to at first try and get his families attention, he sometimes would drop hints but they never got them as time went on he developed it into a stress reliever, then a way to punish himself and finally he did whenever
Sacrament (english version)
_this is my first try at a story like this, hope you like it ;)_ _note: i do not own this story, it is based on the comic by dr.
A Dragons Rescue. Memories
I open my eyes and laugh in surprise when the engine starts the first try without any trouble. "hahahaha see? first try and it started!" as i say that the engine stops again. ".... damn it." "why do you go and say stuff like that?
Ambushed
Not a moment later he felt his tailhole penetrated, the other dragon's cock hitting its mark first try with practiced ease. red began to let out a moan in delight but a paw clamped down on his snout, shoving it too into the dirt.
Cubi Problem Solving (Part 1)
#11 of mystic family (first try) the blackriver family are off on a bit of an adventure in realms far from home, but things just don't seem to be going their way.
Ethan in the Locker Room
The dog joined him, growling low as he shut his eyes tight, first trying to hold back the deluge of cum, then shouting loudly as he gave in and filled the ferret's inside with his jizz.
Breaking Point
He had tried to resist at first, tried to hold onto the last shreds of his dignity, but they had quickly worn him down. each wolf had taken their turn with him, asserting their dominance, leaving him bruised and broken in more ways than one.