Some Early Morning Fun
Negative and positive criticism is always appreciated.
Into the Horizon: Power Contested Part 3
This one was the sub-light's going critical. dasher heard the door open and realized that he was helpless to do anything to save himself. he still didn't have his vision.
Dreams of Shackles
:d please comment, criticisms are fine... in fact they are welcome! this isnt n. korea, i wont shoot you for criticizing me, i need criticism to improve. and i very much want to improve. so comment and criticize at you leasure.
Peppers Are Hot, Keys Are Cold
Joey and kit finish te milk and move on to the next task, bumping the critics into last place. "hurry up, eddy!" barbara says. "we're in last and you don't chug faster, we're done for." "i'm almost done!" eddy says.
D.M.O.N. - Chapter 6: The First Expirience in Battle.
Thank you for any comments and critics that you gave me so far.
Chapter 34: Meetings with The Armor Evolution.
I thank you for those who participate and i do accept any critics and/or comments to my bad writing skills and many more (lol). thank you.
Virtual Friendship, Draft 1 CH 18
The critical hits piled up and by the time he had the body behind a tree, the player was out of it and he ran to his next target.
Horse meat
critics and comments, yes please.
30- Shattering Masks and Glasses
Yet by the time she had reached the top step, syrra had set aside her internal criticism and bowed with iaora, keeping her eyes low. "matriarch bast," she intoned evenly.
Bakeneko's Curse pt. 1
A story i wrote about one of my favorite characters. any criticism is wonderful, i'm a horrible writer v,v neveah, a bakeneko, sits atop a tree looking out over a city filled with lights and sounds.
Dragon of the Night, Tiger of the Dragon
Blake is copyright and used with permission from blakeofdragon please send all comments and criticisms to [[email protected]](/cdn-cgi/l/email-protection) all comments and criticisms are welcome, thank you * * * skyler groaned appreciatively, his
A Big Surprise
* * * criticism would be greatly appreciated, as long as it is constructive :).