The legend of Tigersight Part I The Begining of the End Prologue
#1 of the legend of tigersight (disclaimer) i welcome any critique or suggestions or comments, as these are incentive for me to write more. be it character, story or grammar based, feel free to comment or send me a note/email.
Puppy Love Chapter 3
I have no idea how it will end, so any ideas, comments, and critiques are welcome. flames will be laughed at and discarded._ the next morning i pulled my bike out of the garage and put my helmet on.
The Five Warriors of Legend [Introduction]
.^ please provide critique if you have any as this will improve and make me a better writer in the long run. and don't be shy to give any ideas and suggestions because 9/10 chance that it would make it into my story (with reference of course).
Family and Friends
critique would be like, but try to keep it as positive as possible please.
An Unusual Pregnancy
She showed not her face, but fain would amaze my muse through command of her quill, inspiring wit; to fave and critique...
A small town welcome, Pt. 5
Comments, compliments, critiques, insults, leave a comment. levi stood up, giving cam a hug. "i got an appointment to make, can you get home from here cam?" the fox nodded his head. it was with that levi left. levi walked back to the school.
Pokemon Crystal Pornlocke
This is also 18+ please don't read if you are under 18+ feel free to comment any critiques. pokemon is not owned by me but is owned by gamefreak and nintendo thumbnail image is not owned by me and belongs to gamefreak and nintendo pornlocke rules: 1.
Prologue: Minraya
* * * **so yeah i have decided start my path as a writer making some little stories about war, don't worry thought i am don't too edgy, please leave your comments with feedback and critique so i can make better writing in the future**. **thanks!
Trollhunters Part 2 Review
I mention this as it leads to a critique for season 2. i waited up to watch season 2 (or part 2, as netflix categorized it as), and repeated the all night binge i had done with the previous season.
The Prison ~ CYOA Java Game ~ V.1
Suggestions, ideas and critique are always welcome! version 1: bad horsie features: - one encounter with, like, 6 different possible 'fun' interaction paths. - that's it. yes, there'll be more for sure. no, i'm still writing them.
Three Years - Prologue
critique is very welcome, i want to improve my writing so i can deliver the very best, and if you ever see anything you think should change/written differently or just in general things that seem off, please do tell me so, just be nice about it!
Blue skies, Red waters
Hope you like it and critique is welcome. )) once upon a time, on another planet, in another galaxy there was a race of people. they were known as the 'ru.