Just Another Day at the Office
critiques are welcome and encouraged to improve my writing. plap! plap! the sound became almost inaudible after six months – wonder why i’m still hearing it. maybe i’m too observant.
Damsel In Distress
That being said feel free to critique the story and such. all comments (good and bad) are welcome. he had travelled for many days and nights, trekked through harsh conditions, slain many monsters, and had climbed the tallest mountain in the land.
Wolf Lovers (poem)
Favorites, and again, not my first =) i think this shows how i thought (that's right, not anymore) about my wolf lover a long time ago xd hopefully some of you peoples out there felt/feel like this about your (ex maybe) lover as well ^^ feel free to critique
Puppy Love Chapter 2
I have no idea how it will end, so any ideas, comments, and critiques are welcome. flames will be laughed at and discarded._ all day monday i couldn't focus on my classes.
In the Beginning
Hope you enjoy this and comments and critique are always helpful, i'm still new at this, so...
A small town welcome, pt.3
Comments, compliments, critiques, insults, leave a comment. cam grabbed his backpack and headed back to class. same old boring classes like yesterday. cam just tried to stay awake. every so often pausing as he got a taste of the kangaroo's seed.
Mounting the Orc
Then came the explanations, the questions, the critiques. and then the show. show the orc was already dreading and craving, his breathing quickened. his teeth bit into the gag more while saliva dripped from his curled lips. and then… the faces.
The legend of Tigersight Part I The Begining of the End Prologue
#1 of the legend of tigersight (disclaimer) i welcome any critique or suggestions or comments, as these are incentive for me to write more. be it character, story or grammar based, feel free to comment or send me a note/email.
Letters of Einstein & Rosen Chapter 1: "Out of Time"
If they don't learn to change, there's no telling what will happen to them (critique always welcome) -- first: https://www.sofurry.com/view/593043 previous: https://www.sofurry.com/view/593043 next: ? "no, you can't use road.
Spots & Scales
Comments and critiques are always welcome, enjoy the story guys! a small leopard sits on her favorite tree stump, deep in the forest that surrounds her neighborhood. from head to toe this girl is a leopard.
Reward for a Maiden
As always comments, critique, and suggestions are welcome. marty sat at the dining room table. the tiger grumbled a little as he looked at the clock. his meal still had not arrived yet and he was beginning to formulate ways to punish his slave.
First Days Last Forever
Comments, critiques, etc are all welcome. want me to do a story for you? om me with all the details you can provide and i'll work with you to make it a reality. "why do i always do my best work when its well past when i should be in bed?"