One Shot Short Story (M/M)
. <3 editorial help by: http://www.furaffinity.net/user/nikolinni **act 1** a high pitch sound gradually increases in volume as the cell phone vibrates against the headboard of the bed.
story: A Dragon in Equestria: Greldon & Twilight (w/m)
I know, this story would need some editorial work (english is not my native language), but i wanted to publish it now since i posted sucessfully the german version yesterday...
Savannah Law (first draft)
I will be grateful for any critique and editorial comments.] rabbits were evil. it was the only conclusion lewis could draw.
Fantasmas del Pasado, primera parte
--la editorial de alfred es una de las mejores en europa. pero su jefa es bastante dura con quienes trabajan para ella. aunque no te la creas, alfred le tiene algo de pavor. -- ¡si no abres ahora mismo, tumbare esa puerta!
Heroes of Ampsburgh
Internally, she made a note to have a talk with her agent about setting up interviews with jerks who still referred to that one-off comment in the editorial pages back at the beginning.
The Vampire's Servant
Much thanks goes to silverrfox for his editorial suggestions. **the vampire's servant** the young night sky is clear, save for the full moon, as a cloaked bat walks down his torch lit hallway.
Just Another Night at the Bar..
I had felt my eyes get a little wet when phil told me about the editorial position, but when ryan got over the initial shock of what he said about the new gym, he straight up started crying with happiness. "are you serious?"
Bee Stories
I shall mark the points-of-view of each character while supplying only minimal editorialization when necessary.
The Rikifur Chronicles: Chapter 31 – Winter of Discontent
Her suggestions and editorial corrections are worth more than gold. enjoy.
Chapter 32: The Death of Fox McCloud
Walter kent pointed out in his editorial that mister conley failed to take seriously fox mccloud's warning that he had posted on his property wall and paid the price with his life.
The Rikifur Chronicles: Chapter 35 - Homecoming
That she was willing to accept the tedious job of searching for lost words, confused narration, inconsistencies, misspelling of places and names, and all the other editorial mistakes i can't seem to identify on my own, is a gift i gratefully acknowledge.
Against the Hordes of the Bitch Queen
Please enjoy chapter 14 of "against the hordes of the bitch queen" :) huge thanks to saga for letting me run amok with his characters, and also thanks for his great editorial advice.