Off the Record (Gay/Diapers)

The handsome, young critic, who perhaps was not the most impartial of critics, wanted to know more about the great miles baxxter: who is he, and why is he so damn good?

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The Council of Species

I am a new writer, obviously, and i need criticism. the council of species is a meeting of many gods in the world of vessel. the gods that come to this meeting each represent a species of mortals living in vessel.

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Through the Mists

As i soak in the hot spring, my thoughts drift away from my studies and teacher's criticism. the rustling leaves and chirping birds make me forget everything else and just exist in the moment.

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Two Voices

She wantsto share her work but she never expected to feel so awkward when someone came along that genuinely admiresit, or is criticizing it to the abyss, *oh god please no*, she doesn't know what he's thinking.she looks at him and sees only a face bearing

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Faction lore: Krazzak

A documentary on my custom species the krazzak this is my first story so be please keep that in mind, i will accept criticism due to being an author that wants to improve.

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Jack Hopps Chapter 5 Part 1 of 3 (A Zootopia Story)

Thanks, nick should be fine he is in critical condition to his ribs but they will heal. nicole: thank you! bogo: don't worry about a thing! we have been tracking fugitives selling illegal flesh and parts of prey meat. judy: it is disgusting!

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The Dark Pact

Thanks to water neko for her helpful criticism! and because of it, i am going to switch from 1st person view, to third. i apologize if this confuses anyone, and i hope the story is just as enjoyable! if not, leave me a comment saying so!

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Love & Understanding

Constant criticism and repeated isolation greeted him whenever he would try and be around other kids his age. early on it was simply being ignored, sometimes it would turn into hurtful words or angry stares.

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Teilo and the Desk-Husky

At no point did the desk-husky ever seem bored, and at no point did the otter feel any need to reach out and adjust the dog's angle or criticize his technique.

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Tales of the Huntsville Mayors - Prologue

Fifty years later, no one remembers the critics. the journey hasn't always been smooth, though.

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