Zion: Light of the New Moon Part 3, Temple of Unity Ch 0
A chill went up the hyena's spine the moment zachary spoke a comment that cut an end to the argument, "we should have gone back for my pack."
Full Moon In The City
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Aric's Life
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Brother In Law
"sorry sir, we don't condone speciest comments." the man behind the counter replied. "our code allows the person on the receiving end of the comment one free hit, since this is technically a private property." "i'm going to sue your asses."
I Kept Peeking At The Urinals… Then He Noticed!
One time a middle-aged otter guy actually commented on _my_ dick. he stood by me, whipped out his cock, then stared right at mine as he started pissing.
A tale of dragons part 17
I have something to say about chapter 16's comments. i know you all enjoyed it. 13 straight 5's means that not one of you thought it was unworthy of being put into an elite category. but the comments...only 1. i'm not complaining or anything.
A New Kaiju
Brandon raised a brow at the realistic comments, knowing full well it was a 2d picture, and little else. "this is...unbelievable." as brandon scrolled through the many comments, he paused at one comment in particular.
Adopted by a Werewolf Chapter 1
Rodrig was in the middle of taking another drink when he heard the crass comment. he nearly spit his ale out at the surprising comment. instead he ended up inhaling half the mouthful and started coughing.
By the light... Chapter 10 When needs must
Balthazar commented, "it is not purrsimon or purrdita." simeon glanced at him, "do you know him then?"
"Family Tails" - Epilogue
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Oh Deer! (Part 1)
We both know what we want, so let's get to it", sage commented as the space between her legs "burned" with anticipation.
These Perfect Moments
Ray laughed good-naturedly at the comment and patted paul on the back, "no... but i know you well enough to tell that something's up.