The Lead Crown: Ch 1c, Steam Punked
"less commentary, more speaking." alarice noted flatly, realizing she was missing pieces of the conversation. "--just keep running into you, don't i?" inigo noted on behalf of the wolf. "a shame you don't watch where i'm going, hmm?"
Pretty Good Bathtime
She crooned, her words the same teasing commentary she may have given before, with the dane at her side, but now held a tone of affectionate teasing.
Jez: A Reason To Stay
(commentary from 2006) as nanowrimo 2005 came to a close, i didn't reach the word-goal, nor did i finish my story "datchildren".
Dream Girl: Rouge The Bat
Her commentary was slowly starting to get to me. if she figured she was so high-and-mighty, i'd have to knock her down a peg. without giving her a word of warning, i pushed her to the floor.
Let it Be, Ch 4
Agatha forstalled any further harsh commentary by asking a very direct question, "why are you here?" the jackal glanced to the female alligator, then to ackert, then, finally, cory, "there are kingdom soldiers all over town looking for you, tanner."
A Bleak Outlook (Part 1 of 2)
Mundane commentary: it was a common tactic the former-tribal bat employed to stall for time, and although geoffrey could read his ulterior motives clear as day, he always humored them; there was a certain je ne sais quoi to the bat that made it hard for geoffrey
Windfall: Hard Sleeper
Flying out to record dvd commentary? no, that wasn't for a few months. maybe she could just ask max. max--that was it! the otter bounced out of bed and eeled around the room. stuffing the phone in the elastic of her boxers, she stretched.
The Trainer's Touch - Part 3 - Little Lass on the Prairie
Her background computer commentary sparked at the sudden development: _user **mastermime:**'ouch!'_ _user **charwizard:**'best mistake ever!'_ _user **lurkinglizard:**'c'mon girl, i know you can take it!'
The Briin Expedition 6: To the White Forest
"i reserve my commentary... madam." "relax, suit. a woman must have her indulgences," she glanced toward tan. "ready?" "yeah," tan said. he promptly leapt from the platform. his ascender screamed down the line.
Lessons in Jahaliyan Manners - 1
Robin nodded and interjected with commentary when it was called for, but mostly basked in the joy coming off of the princess. indeed, she also felt exceedingly happy. "...and i also burnt all of my clothing last night!
School Dazed
"right," professor marshalls said, "well, personal commentary aside, that's, um... that's..." she collapsed. "oh, fuck," the tall doe - maria - said, "her spell kicked back in again."
Day Spent with a Friend
commentary and critiques are very much appreciated. ps: to all my k9 friends/watchers... no, your not in this lol "its a love/hate relationship we have here, you know.