Ship references part 1
Status: lost in the battle for x, when amelia, her systems going critical, beamed her crew over to excalibur and rammed her ship into the closest xian battleship she could find.
A Silent Soul- Chapter 1
Feel free to leave a comment with constructive criticism, or just say if you liked it! or not! totally up to you! other than that, i think it's time to go! bye! ^\_^
Settling in
Please comment/criticize as usual any feedback is more than welcome.
Moonlight Fells Right - chapter 1
~~~~~~~~~~ as i said at the top, all constructive criticism is welcome.
Wedded Bliss
(for those who don't get it: constructive criticism = "i didn't like this and this about your story and you could do this better." as opposed to, "you suck!").
Delta Chronicles ch.2
"john is in critical condition." clarice said pointing to the bloodied arctic fox on the stretcher that jack had set up. "holy shit." jj commented quietly. suddenly a shower of bulletshit the ground just behind them.
Have a Smoke With Us, Kiddo
And like i said before, don't be harsh with criticism, but please, do give it. thanks!
Like Glass
Without intent his morbid, languid sketches grew critical artistic acclaim from local critics. acclaim brought about from unsettling night terrors.
Chapter Thirteen
Don't forget leave a comment, feedback, and criticism. enjoy! ian p.o.v _i can't believe they would send her to retrieve me!
Friends, Lovers, Partners ~ Prologue
As this is my first submission, and comments and criticism are welcome. vote or fave if it pleases you to do so.
The Explorer: Forward
I am very open to constructive criticism and if you give me some feedback, i will do my best to get back to you and chat with you about it, but dont take offense if i dont.
Men vs Women
Women criticize unfairly. a man is the boss. a woman is just bossy. men are confident. a woman is opinionated and pushy. men are leaders. women need to be led. men speak the truth. women unfairly accuse the "innocent."