Chapter 3: Expect the Unexpected
Comments and constructive criticism always appreciated.
Things Happen in Time -Part 1
I would like all the helpful criticism from anyone. this may be a running series if i can think of what to write and if i have the time. enjoy! ^^ * * * "come on zexma, wake up already!"
Save Yourself
Constructive criticism is welcome. days like these make me wish i hadn't known her. its about four in the morning, but i didn't get a wink of sleep. "well shit." i muttered, pushing the sheets off my body, "no use in trying anymore."
Lost Fun-Chapter 1
About five minutes pased before they both both hit critical. "im close"he growled with his eyes squinted. she didnt know what that meant but caught on as he pushed into a very tight passage,and realeased his seed flowing in.
Jaime's babyfur journal
An: consructive criticism is apreciated and nice comments are ok but mean one not accepted. if i see one mean comment i will remove this story i dont write for you i write for myself and i dont need to post these online.
Life by the Page 1
If leon was anything more than a novelist he was his own best critic. he always felt as though he didn't socialize enough, as though he was a recluse that only cared about his work. this wasn't entirely true of course but these thoughts did hold merit.
First Kindness
Constructive criticism will be greatly appreciated. "wake up kitty, it's only an hour before we arrive to your new owner's home." the voice speaking to her seemed so kind, so friendly though jaccie knew this was just a facade.
Terveta-Chapter 6: Questions (Part 1)
Keisha gasped as soon as her eyes fell upon her critically conditioned love and ran to his side. "blizzard!" she yelled and leaped right to his side. "my god..." dean breathed with widened eyes, fear striking deep within him.
Welcome Home Sasha
She lightly toweled the younger female off and again eyed her critically, her eyes roving to the feline's heat swollen slit. "the first heat is always the worst."
Natural Twenty (WIFWOLF)
\>she then throws the die onto the table \>everyone seated at the table leans over to see the result and it’s a…one \>the rat leans back in his seat \>”critical failure.
What Tigers Dream Of - Chap. 1
So comments and constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. ?
The way to a gryphon's heart
"i've warned you that i'm critical of everything human-related, but you took in my criticism surprisingly well." "they're just objects. distractions to take my mind beyond the familiarity of my territory.