A Sure Thing
There is both m/f and m/m m/f in paragraphs 19 - 45 m/m in paragraphs 46 - 69 i love reading any comments and criticism. have a wonderful day :) wait what? that place? yeah yeah, i know all about it. where'd you even - know what, never mind.
A Fox Behind Bars part 3
On the technical front, i heard about paragraph length, and while the short one might work for somethings, they could be jerky and off putting to some. so, i'm paying more attention to when a new paragraph is really warranted.
The Beginner's Guide to RPing - Introduction and Basics!
The paragraphs can range in length; the more important part is the -structure- of what you post. there may be times where you only feel able to post a single sentence because of what the other person posted. this is not a cause for concern!
MLP school Part 1: not all
His eyes went wide as he looked at his book, when he noted that twilight was pointing to the page and paragraph he was at.
I'm Only Human
Oh and i know the first two paragraphs are crap but i don't really care about that. i'm not sure if i'm gonna write more to this story because i don't know where i want to go with it.
CYOA Charlie Goat regrets everything Chapter 2
Probably a few areas i could have added more choices as well, but i'd like to practice some storytelling as well as just throwing smut into every paragraph.
Obsession
I came like three times while trying to write the last few paragraphs, and i'm exhausted. fucksake, it's getting late anyways, so i might go to bed early. still gonna keep working on putting the temple together.
Serenaded
Dominion is fa: forest-wolf / fa: spottedsqueak arci is my superhero for the new rhodia setting, shared by kaijou, forest, and russ (and sometimes fa: jagkitty as proven by his vignette this month) the first two paragraphs of this are direct quotes from
Chapter One: Starting with Something New
Nyah, who am i kidding, i'm just wasting time now, trying to explain something in a few paragraphs, when i'd be better off writing out an entire story. (sighs) here goes nothing i suppose.
Commission for thestarwarrior
-a small bit of the first few paragraphs were changed by the commissioner(ee?) so it could better flow with his other pieces -if you read into the story, you'll find out that june and hunter is the same person. hunter is her nickname. ...
Prologue: finding myself dragon vs elf
Thiisis the prologue that i had writin some time ago on my ipad's notebook setting so i am yet to correct it andthe paragraphs have no real meaning in it, simply to make it easier to read rather than a mass of words that can be quite confusing
Cheolfs: The History of the Species
As noted in the previous paragraph, the cheolfs are a rare species but not as rare as one would think. since the species is a result of two entirely different branches, the more correct term for them would be hybrids.