Nate and i have been talking. after you walk, we want you to come live with us in charlotte."
"what?" i asked.
"let's face it. you're not living in a part of the country known for world class health care.
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Nothing is happening other than talking; also known as: talking heads syndrome.
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speech recognized: user #0001: "i wasn't talking to you."
speech recognized: user #0002: "and now she has a wrong impression on that question. shut her off before she processes that."
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The talking shire whinnied softly. "damn, boy... you have some soft paws on ya..."
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Well, i need some help rehearsing my speech for the conference tomorrow, and i'm glad to have you two as my audience."
"like i said before, del, no problem."
blitzen leaned into his brother. "yeah, so what's your speech all about?"
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speaking of dialogue... oh, we weren't? well, we are now! dialogue can be tricky. i don't have a lot to say on the subject, but i can at least pass on a few pointers that i've picked up.
try to give your characters a unique "voice" if you can.
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: casual/sporty
describe hairstyle: standard
fur color: tan
genital size: length 7", circumference 6"
speech
voice tone: baritone, smooth
accent: appalachian
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"he's a talking shire at the ranch. i'm talking about an old breeding stud there."
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'i'll leave you to your speech.'
luna's class started as normal and the teacher began to call on students to present their speech. luna was thankful he wasn't the first one called to do his speech. he had his paper ready.
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"i know mike, but i wish we could have been sooner and saved his speech centres - at least now we know when a male trill's the blood-cooling must be set-up with 2 days on it's onset. otherwise the speech centres are the first to go."
mike nodded.
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