To Boldly Hoof It Ch 19. Mistakes! Mistakes Everywhere!
Come on, writers, even you have to admit that's pretty bad writing!" said bon bon."in power rangers turbo, why did they stop using the zeo powers? there was nothing wrong with them! they just switched over to the turbo powers for no apparent reason!"
The Other Dragon World: Chapter 2
Spyro tried in vain to read the bad writings, until he put up his head and said, "so, then, maybe you're correct. he wanted me to come there at any times, and not necessarily today."
What Dreams May Come
But i find that sometimes good writing comes out of a detailed response to bad writing; in noting another author's fallacies, i am occasionally guided to the beautiful. anthony hadn't slept at all the past four nights. too much on his mind, he thought.
Sonic.EX3: Chapter 2
At first i thought it was bad writing when it popped up out of nowhere. then i thought it was going to kill me if i played it. after that, i wasn't so sure.
Stellar Wayfarer: Six
Hopefully it didn't reflect as bad writing though. same as before, do let me know what you with with comments. tear it apart with critique, it'll be that much easier to try and improve if i know what i'm doing wrong.
The Pool, Chapter Two.
I haven't written fiction in a long time, so it's not that great, but bad writing is better than no writing, i guess... evet was warm.
Capture My Heart
The old stories that i'm reposting are not revised so bad writing and errors are still there as they were originally. **capture my heart** by: rakuen growlithe disclaimer: i don't own pokemon, nintendo etc. i just enjoy it and write fan fiction.
Honor In Blood Chapter 4
Putting two characters together from the start would be bad writing. because you don't know why they are together. there is a word for this and it is called fan service. my story is not a "fan service" story.
Role Play
He hated bad writing, no matter how or where it manifested. discovering just how easy it was for someone to mistake wit for dismissal or disparagement, he had reduced himself to using "lol" in his various bits of electronic correspondence.
The Love of Toys 11
[i]that’s bad writing, and bad people stuff,[/i] he thought. [i]okay. guess oury’s not the only one learning today…[/i] black stood his ground as oury looked down at him, the snake stepping forward as he continued.
Chapter 43: Not-So Pleasant Reunion.
"but, i mean—that's just bad writing then, my guy!" as the two continue their dispute, serene pats her brother on the back, concerns spreading throughout. ethan tenses up, his shakiness persists. "come on, ethan…" serene lowers her ears.
Suspension of disbelief
If we're presented with something very unbelievable or the author doesn't set solid enough rules, we may disregard it as bad writing! i want you to reflect on that as you read _don't think if i do_.