Springtime (Revision)
Mooch sat on the forest floor, back legs spread wide and back against a large tree. His tail was curled upward, concealing his tailhole. His thick, but short cock stood at full mast, exposed to the cool autumn air. Humphrey slowly walked over to him,...
The Party(Revised)
Ok, this is the First Yiff story I wrote, and I posted it, but under the name UberElite... I F-ing lost my password when Yahoo decided to delete my old email adress.. bastards, anyhow I made a buncha changes, and am reposting it. I have another story...
Red Revision
The writer pushed the door shut behind him as he walked into his apartment. He flippantly discarded his tie and tag, articles necessary for his day-to-day job. Now, though, he was free of it and thus allowed to pretend that writing was his primary...
The Magnum Opus - Chapter 5
_new objective: defeat the revised johannes reynoldus_ _new objective: defeat the revised willis reynoldus_ _new objective: defeat the revised nils reynoldus_ there was some comfort in the knowledge that whoever was giving him these objectives, it was not
PSB: A Basic Introductory
Originally, the rule said the first to orgasm lost, but i have revised this as i felt it was much too restricting for determining who was superior in the relationship.
The Gaming Journal #1: The Problem with Fighting Games
Koei tecmo's_dead or alive 5_also had three revisions over the course of 4 years.
A New Brother - Part 18
It was only due to drake's handling of his revision schedule and plans that troy believed he was never held back a year or two.
The Torture-cum-Pleasure
One fine weekend afternoon, eric was revising for his upcoming science test. now dat he had screwed his mathematics test, he had to work extra hard so that he would not fail a second test.
= Prologue: Dreams of Kingdom Past =
With a loud boom, a purple hand-shaped bolt flashed down and struck him._ * * * =subject to revision at any time until further notice=
Panavision
It took five full revisions, but i succeeded! then did another five revisions integrating the changes i had made over the course of the reduction, putting back in sentences i missed, cutting out ones that were unnecessary.
Chapter 4: Vera
After several hours of studying, revising and doing homeworks, momchil decided to take a break. he laid down on his bed, closing his eyes for a second, sighing quietly. he got ready for sleeping.
Foursome Fledgling Study Group
As they revised various topics, knaster also got a chance to look over the recent homework and quiz results for the other three fledglings.