So Young, So Dear
I would love so critique. a sorta-personal thing... about my dearest childhood friend. she's the best friend i ever had, and she's not that person anymore. she just doesn't know it.
I Know (poem)
Ok, not at all one of my firsts on this, but its still so-so i think =/ one of the few i have on da (i have a lot actually written down but i just am really self-conscious about things xd) critique and comment please!
Indian Summer
I know a lot of people consider themselves to be natives of this country, and I for one will never argue against it. It doesn't matter in the long run. Knowing where you came from is great, but knowing where you're going is a far...
Rainfall - Chapter 01
.: this is my first draft, any suggestions, insights, and critiques would be very much appreciated.
Wolf Lovers (poem)
Favorites, and again, not my first =) i think this shows how i thought (that's right, not anymore) about my wolf lover a long time ago xd hopefully some of you peoples out there felt/feel like this about your (ex maybe) lover as well ^^ feel free to critique
Bamyalee
critiques are welcomed and appreciated. i once lived, at the shores of bamyalee, where nothing else touches, but the sea. although filled with clear oceans, and skies of blue, this is not paradise, that is not true.
when we waste away
Comments critiques faves and votes would be appreciated when we waste away we care not for time of day nor for the money in our pocket but for the love we hold in a heart shaped locket we hold it close to the brightest flames we will always remember
Just Me and You
As always, comments and critiques are welcome.
Lavender Scent (Poem)
I'd be happy to take and critique even though it's an older work, always looking to improve. lavender scent drifts palely into the room, as sun and moon trade places in the sky. sadness shall find nothing here but doom.
Macaroni, King of Mudpie
The poodle mentally critiques each dog, actually, he does it out loud, and a doberman tries to poop in his mouth, but he doesn't have it in him, and besides, macaroni needs to discuss plans of taking over the world.
Clipped Winged Crow
And critique me, i don't bite. \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_ i've got a crow sitting on my window tapping, begging to be let in so many treat him like an angel and, god, hes a beautiful sin i've got a spider in my
Concept Ideas for a story
It's in the planning stage, so if you have any suggestions, questions, or critique please tell me so that i know just where to improve. here is a quick description of the plot, characters, and the kind of themes and fetishes it might include.