The Hunter's Choice Chapter One: Young Blood
Again as i said before this is my first story and i would like feedback good and bad but please be gentle with the bad feedback but yes i will update with chapter two when i get enough time but for those who do tea this first chapter and like it i promise
The Lusty Dragon
But he knew he would always wander alleyways, trying again to find that lusty dragon. \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_ there it is folks, please leave some feedback^^
Chapter 2: The Beginning of a Business Relationship
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Wanderings Teaser
Any feedback at all will motivate me to write more. let me know what what you think, even a good/bad would be helpful.
One Way Out - Chapter 16 (Predator & Prey)
Many thanks go out to all those who have recently followed, faved and most importantly, given feedback on my fanfic.
What Once Was... Ch 13
R.c. then slides the two 40hz faders down which silences the feedback. "good timing fox! you always have an ear for that. we forgot to flip that earlier when geoff was there." thomas quips up.
MFM4: The Invasion
Bates would've barely noticed, hadn't it been for some irritating guitar feedbacks. suddenly he had an idea, and he was sure hartford wouldn't like it...
The Mook Maker, Chapter 28: The Rage That Binds
But with the influences of the vitality transfer mixed with the feedback i never felt before, i opted to ignore it all completely. there was a part of us missing. i would get that back.
The Temple of a Forgotten God
Anyways, feedback sustains me, and once i've got the whole series to date uploaded i'll take any feedback into consideration when writing the next story. the temple of a forgotten god this story contains oral vore, magic vore, and resurrection.
Farming with dragons
On this i need pointers first time doing this comment please and will be working on my second one as soon as i get enough feedback thanks for reading don't forget to comment please
Until I Have to Go
It'll help me to be a better writer, and i always enjoy my feedback. also remember that votes, faves and watches help others to find these stories to read. cheerio!
Adventures in College: Intro
Any feedback or constructive criticism is greatly appreciated and i hope you guys enjoy it^^ if i get mostly positive feedback i will make it a series but i'm pretty busy so the wait may be long between chapters:/ this will be just a short introduction. #