Tea and Crumpets in the Garden

That should be was in the past tense. as in i am no longer." stepping back, johnathan tried to understand. "how? old man smith would hardly let you go if you were working under his guidance.

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No Light to be Seen: Chapter 14

Wait...make the previous sentence's last part past tense. well at least the only person that matters likes the surprise forced change.

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Drakensang Chapter 8

. - it's all past tense now... - look, kyle, you should go. you're the guest of honor there - she pointed out - if you won't go, then what is the purpose? besides, it's a chance for you to get a social promotion.

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Shadow of a Freelancer Ch 10.) The Deadly Flirt part 1

Yes it's told in past tense, and if no one likes that or you're under 18 then you probably shouldn't read it.

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Bastion - Pt. 1

_i have a terrible habit of switching between past tense and present tense. i try to go back and fix it, but i'm sure i miss some.i write for fun, and have no plan when i write. when i sit down and start typing, i just go.

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The Wildcat - Human's POW

"past tense? does that mean you trust me now," i asked, eyes full of happiness and hope. "maybe... i don't know - i just need some time to decide what i want exactly, and if i really want to trust humans again."

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Brand

"your use of the past tense amuses me," the man had chuckled. "bastard!" her teeth and fists had clenched as she removed her hand, but she knew that even ceres didn't stand a chance against the forces that would be levelled against her.

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College Life: Chapter 8

"yes, 'accepted' note the usage of the past tense. that 'acceptance' wouldn't last long. needless to say, he did something that would forever destroy our relationship and any compassion i had for the emmanuelite church."

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Summer Time Fun - Part 2

It was a heavy emphasis on the past tense. the split sounded like it would have happened eventually. mike talked himself from depression to a horny cheerfulness that made kyle a bit uncomfortable.

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The Phobia

"notice the past tense? i don't know, it's just one of those things. since i was a kid." john quirked an eyebrow. "so what's the scary part? how they look?" i shook my head. "hmm. maybe, it's how they move..."

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Roads Untraveled - Part XXIII

"past tense? the kids start a fight or something?" "our kits are wonderful, and i just said i chose a nice tod that looked like lara as their dad. she didn't say anything else. the girls more than made up for the surprise."

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