Expansive Imprint - Thursday Writing Prompt
And right as i was about to give a prestigious critic a very important glance at my latest..." **\*bing bong\*** the doorbell chimed, interrupting the vulpine.
A Special Present for a Special Father
Constructive criticism is welcomed as this is my first story i have written. * * * "what a beautiful day" said the white tiger as he stretched and got out of bed.
Mist-Chapter 1
I love criticism so don't be afraid to hurt my feelings. thanks.
Unified Species of the Galaxy (Scrapped)
This theory is heavily criticized however but the critics admit that they cannot come up with a more convincing theory to replace the fragmented asteroid theory.
?A Boy and His Ampharos
So please enjoy it and criticism is greatly appreciated. a boy and his ampharos warning: this story contains pokemon and soft non-fatal vore so if you dont like this thing do no read this story.
Another Kind of Empathy - Prologue
Don't forget that constructive criticism! (so nervous... sitting here for 5 minutes hovering over the button... okay, deep breaths. 3... 2... 1... save!)
Maverick Hotel Part 29
"these next couple of days are critical for healing that concussion of yours, and you can't do too much critical thinking or exercise until we're certain you'll make a full recovery."
Paraskepite- Chapter Fourteen
The detective is alive, he's in the hospital in critical condition. not to mention the police are on a manhunt to find you. i said i wanted an accident."
The Attack
I put your dad in critical condition... and aren't you a little shaken up from that abuse?" "you put that bastard in critical condition to keep me from it.
Chapter 2 - A Change of Situations
Our situation had been critical enough for the past couple of weeks since i mysteriously appeared on the horizon with no food and, most critical of all, no news as to where my colony could move in order to hunt for much needed food.
Lost Pokemon Episodes: Episode 13 Royal Seafront Assult
Vinzith attacks again but trips again this time hurting himself critically. eleckid take this time to land a good punch on vinzith causing the plant pokémon to become more exhausted.
Stress Relief
Granted, the slip had been carrying a meal to a food critic and put the meal all over the critic, but it had not been his fault whatsoever.