Malfunction
Current trajectory reaches critical location relative to planet zg-10 in forty minutes."_ tziou took a deep breath to compose himself, found it insufficient, and took another one, to more effect.
Bakeneko's Curse pt. 1
A story i wrote about one of my favorite characters. any criticism is wonderful, i'm a horrible writer v,v neveah, a bakeneko, sits atop a tree looking out over a city filled with lights and sounds.
Mickey Mouse in the Public Domain - Chapter 11
Felix asked critically. "public domain, aren't we? everywhere is my jurisdiction." "i'm not sure that's how that works," felix said, "technically, copyright oughtn't be within your jurisdict-" "enough!"
Dragon of the Night, Tiger of the Dragon
Blake is copyright and used with permission from blakeofdragon please send all comments and criticisms to [[email protected]](/cdn-cgi/l/email-protection) all comments and criticisms are welcome, thank you * * * skyler groaned appreciatively, his
A Big Surprise
* * * criticism would be greatly appreciated, as long as it is constructive :).
Down One Up One
The critics collect the next clue from a watcher who was set up by toner in case they used their pass. with one team skipping the challenge, the others are in a tight race to get out of last.
My Great Big Brother - Let's Just Wing It!
Anyway, i sort of lampoon my critics here, but i also lampoon my well wishers and even myself. so don't take any of this stuff personally. if you happened to criticize my work, i'm not angry.
Another Tundra Race
The mountain climbers claimed victory again and the critics fell short. however, luck was on their side as it was all non-elimination. 7 teams are still left in the race. who will fall into last?
Brother Light, Brother Dark: In Which a Royal Entrance is Made
And carefully sifting through them, he found himself to be ashamed of two things: that he was only now critically examining his physique, and that he was so critically examining his physique.
MechWarrior-Fur Chapter 3
One type 2 went critical, taking at least five infantry with him and damaging the type 3, which had lost it's left arm.
Furry Fan Interviews Character Guide
When he isn't quiet, he tends to criticize aniro, much to his chagrin.
ST: TDF Chapter 1
Then added, "main power plant is in critical condition. energy readings show high levels of radiation are slowly building. three hours before it reaches critical mass and self-destructs." fox sighed and shook her head. "anyone or anything aboard?"