Life by the Page 1
If leon was anything more than a novelist he was his own best critic. he always felt as though he didn't socialize enough, as though he was a recluse that only cared about his work. this wasn't entirely true of course but these thoughts did hold merit.
First Kindness
Constructive criticism will be greatly appreciated. "wake up kitty, it's only an hour before we arrive to your new owner's home." the voice speaking to her seemed so kind, so friendly though jaccie knew this was just a facade.
Terveta-Chapter 6: Questions (Part 1)
Keisha gasped as soon as her eyes fell upon her critically conditioned love and ran to his side. "blizzard!" she yelled and leaped right to his side. "my god..." dean breathed with widened eyes, fear striking deep within him.
Dynasty: Origins, Act 04: Racing Out of Debt
It seemed to be slower now, apparently actually taking a critical hit. apparently the text that had appeared wasn't exaggerating. i didn't see a sign of the first place hovercopter as of yet, but i knew i wasn't that far from it.
Best of the WORST of TNA Wrestling
Frank trigg tna has no problem getting into bed with mma (mainly because of spike) and while i've criticized mma involvement in the past, this one is the worst.
The Road to the Hospital
He was critically injured, almost crippled. but he had no idea of the _true_ nature of his friend's injuries. he wouldn't find out until he got there. he increased his speed a little, a tad over the speed limit.
Starkind: Defy the Dark
A confederal asset and exo-law enforcement officer, acting on behalf of the critical operations protection agency, awakens aboard her nearly derelict ship--the csos spear of diomedes--in critical condition, her memory of events prior fractured due to brain
Last Night I Dreamt of Dragons
“honestly, you corporeal critters need more presence of mind in your waking hours,” she turned her head to sweep his nearly naked form critically.
Welcome Home Sasha
She lightly toweled the younger female off and again eyed her critically, her eyes roving to the feline's heat swollen slit. "the first heat is always the worst."
What Tigers Dream Of - Chap. 1
So comments and constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. ?
Duty Chapter 25: A Needed Calm
"i guess alex is one of them," he said, "...i mean...uh...i mean...you know...in critical condition..." jerry placed his hand on joji's shoulder, "go home, joji. we can take care of things around here."
Natural Twenty (WIFWOLF)
\>she then throws the die onto the table \>everyone seated at the table leans over to see the result and it’s a…one \>the rat leans back in his seat \>”critical failure.