Highschool - Fitting In and Living Life Ch 4: The Sleepover
All criticism is good criticism; tell me how to make my writing better and i'll try to improve it so. i know it was short, if doing so wouldn't mean having to re-submit, i would turn it all into one chapter.
Grounding The Jacking Jolt
And gorumon felt his body burning as he tried to discharge, despite having nothing left to give…realizing numbly under the ruthless haze of pleasure that he was in critical danger.
Post Workout Sweat (Cinderace Stories Part 1 of 3)
Please let me know if i missed any tags, and leave any criticisms you have. i'm always looking to improve!
A Big Surprise
* * * criticism would be greatly appreciated, as long as it is constructive :).
My first time with a dog
I would love some constructive criticism. last summer my friend was going on a longer vacation in thailand with his girlfriend and he asked me to look after his dog.
Last one left: prologue
criticism and feedback will be appreciated so i can make improvements in the future and if you liked what you've read then don't hesitate to leave a watch and a fav! enjoy!!!!! i can still feel my sins howling over my shoulder.
Chapter 3
That was a critical aspect he had drilled into me repeatedly, about my new life. throw in the connection with sinclair, it would be all bad for everyone involved. many people died in order for me to exist.
2 : Cuckolding
Tell me, and i will surely take your criticism into consideration - and ignore it. joking, or not, idk. enjoy reading. "is that how it started?" the older reptilian voice asked me. "sort of. i mean, i started dating tom in august, britney in september.
Unfortunate Fortunes
The young man who's name is not yet being released is in critical condition but is respected to make a full recovery, if it where not for aden's bravery and will the young man would not be here today...."_
Serenifi: Great Scott! Part III: Final Scene
Now, while i'm obviously a fan, i've learned to be open to any criticisms. every film has flaws, you know. so, without further ado... give me your questions. miaska: vhen vill ve get "part 4"? vincent: what? all 16 cubs: bring us part four!
Heat Of The Moment
criticism welcome! if you want to support what i do, please consider pledging to my patreon. every little bit is greatly appreciated, especially as i don't paywall any of my content!
The Little Grown Up
Constructive criticism is appreciated. :d