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The Start

Newer to writing, please provide constructive critique as it helps an artist grow. or let me know if you like it! it was a particularly bitter sweet day, rhajaro felt as though it would never come.

Military, Sci-Fi, Space

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Preamble

I would be grateful for suggestions and critique, as long as they are constructive. and to repeat myself: i know i have taken lots of artistic freedoms with the lore... so to all you hardcore tabletop warriors... please, just have fun...

Alcohol, Anal, Astartes, Betrayel, Blood, Counterrape, Death, Drugs, Gore, M/F, Magic, Murder, Oral, Rape, Sex, Toys, Transformation, Vaginal, Violence, Wolves, damnation, language, sizeplay

Project Warblade: Chapter 1

Any critique, comments, favorites, or anything else will help greatly. i'll be working on chapter two sometime tomorrow and i'd really love to know how i can improve! and yes, this was imported from my fa.

Cyberwolf, Darkwolf, Darkwolf_empire, Kanova, Lab, Medicallab, Science, Vincent, Wolf, Wolvan, experiment, genetics, growing, medical, research, tube

Alex's Turn

Postamble(); comment+critique please. comments=better/more stories and critiques=better quality

Cock Vore, Fox, M/M, Magic, NC, Snake, Vore (soft)

What Happens in the Field of Reeds (R)

Please offer any kind critiques or comments, this is my first adult short story and i quite adore it!

Anal, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Armor, Aroused, Balls, Belly, Boobs, Breast Fondling, Breasts, Breeding, Buff, Busty, Canid, Canine, Claws, Cock, Compassion, Consensual, Crocodile, Cum, Cumming, Deep Penetration, Deep Thrust, Dick, Egypt, F/M, Fingering, Fondling, Foreplay, Foreskin, French Kissing, Fucking, Grin, Groping, Heterosexual, Humping, Inserting, Jackal, Laugh, Licking, M/F, Mate, Mating, Multiple Species, Muscle, NSFW, Naked, Naughty, Nipples, Nude, Nudity, Oral, Orgasm, Outdoors, Pain, Penetration, Penis, Prey, Pussy, Reptile, Rough, Rough Sex, Scales, Seed, Sex, Sheath, Smile, Teeth, Tongue, Topless, Uncut, Vagina, Vaginal, Vanilla, Virgin, Wet, Yiff, Yiffy

Separation Anxiety F Glaceon X M Trainer

* * * this is my first time writing in this style so critique and comments are appreciated. i haven't written smut in some time so i might be a little rusty regardless i am happy with the result.

Canine, Consensual, Cookie, Creampie, Cum, Cute, Female, Feral, First Person, Human on Feral, Human on pokemon, Impregnation, M/F, Male, Male/Female, Oral, Pokemon, Pokephilia, Rough, Soft fur, Vaginal, glaceon

7:32

Fritz tore down the constricting corridors of Starcruiser-1148, dodging men, machines, and anything else that found itself in his way. The hallways' dim fluorescents tossed just enough light to distinguish objects from shadow, and the small creature...

Anthro, Battle, Fox, Ship, Short, Space, Starcruiser, Story, War, critique, engineer, furry, fuzzy, requested, sci

When Nature Calls #1

Comments are appreciated, seeing as this is a first time escapade for me and critiques or acolades are cool. critiques and acolades are also cool. yeah, word. if you think it's worth it i'll write more.

Anal, Doggystyle, Kangaroo, M/M, Oral, Public

Tails and Sonics' Fun Time.

So, please give me fair critique's of how i could improve this story! thank you! _what........................_ _what have i done.....?'

Cannibalism, Gore, Sonic The Hedgehog, Tails (Sonic The Hedgehog)

The Garden

Because of how old it is you're free to post honest opinions about the quality or style, but not any serious critique because i've made steps in different, more serious writing. xd i have no idea what tags to use for this.

Clean, Fantasy, Short Story

On the Run Chapter 1

Lets get this started' ------------------------------------ end of chapter 1by pcinvisiblecomments and critiques are appreciated

Desert, Mild Violence