Pokemon Lover Studios, Chapter I
Although it's technically third person, almost half of the writing is commentary interjected by the main character. this commentary will be italicized. there will be another unusual feature about pokemon lover studios.
The Royal Harvest, Chapter 1
I'm open to suggestions and commentary but please be gentle, i don't have a lot of experience with writing. hope you all enjoy! chapter 1 present day "cargo 1726, this is igsp 14, please identify." "captain, we're being hailed."
Big Catch
The last thing he needed was a running commentary...couldn’t these fuckers have the courtesy to rape him in silence?
Dream Girl: Rouge The Bat
Her commentary was slowly starting to get to me. if she figured she was so high-and-mighty, i'd have to knock her down a peg. without giving her a word of warning, i pushed her to the floor.
The Wolfess
He offered no additional commentary, not that any was needed. the point was clear, she would never be able to look forward to getting her pussy stuffed again.
Twokinds - Beach Episode
Hearing herself say it out loud made it seem all the naughtier, even if there was nobody but herself to appreciate the lewdness of her commentary.
Falling for a lioness 2 Revenge of the fallen part 37
(commentary: steven gerrard with the shot, it's in the net for england, well there's been some doubts, but those doubts have been swept away now and england are heading for south africa.)
Cell Seduction
After all the commentary about my ass and making babies? you damn well bet i would." "but...but..." he gasped, shaking his head, clutching at his heart. "oh, you would deny me the sight of you?
The Am-Drag Stream 2
Tags: m/solo, streaming, jake long, american dragon, rule 34, body altering, growth, fetish implantation, corruption, nudity, briefs, bulge, erection, dragon, stream chat, exhibitionism, commentary, mind control, hypnosis, zss, miniseries,
Haunted by Demons
The individual and his friend ducking their way through the door forced him to mentally prepare himself for another round of commentary. they were obviously demonic, though their 'class' or what have you was unclear.
Summer FY 01 - Survival Camping
Thank you to harry for his helpful editing and commentary! i couldn't have done it with out him! audio hefted his rucksack up onto his shoulder; it was lighter than it had been after his dad went through it.
RESPECTABLE BEHAVIOUR
It felt incredible in his hand, hot and needy, and he couldn't resist more guttural commentary: "cum for me dragon, i want you to fucking cum for me..."