Action Scene
~December 2011~ In the future you wouldn't think that swords would play any role in combat but I find the combat of centuries past enthralling. Nobody ever sees it coming. The switch from gun to blade. Maybe I'm just nostalgic, for a time period I was...
The Airship and the flashback of the beginning of Pim's ordeal
"...He was a bob-tail did you see", the other crewman shouted. "What?" the engineer let down the phone without plugging the end first "Hello-hello who is this? ...what is your station? Came from the com-tube. Immediately the engineer talked into the...
The Christmas Visit: Part 4
With the end of the action scene, the movie was again fairly quiet and subdued, with tense scenes of suspense rather than gunplay and fireworks. they would have to wait for the next action scene before their own action scene could start.
Blue: Chapter 15
Anyway, that was really fun to write, though, i'm not so sure i'm the best at action scenes. no idea when the next chapter will be ready. until next time~**
Writing Tips
**action sequence tips** action scenes are one of the harder things to write. the trick is to strike a balance in how much description you have.
Hot Summer Horses
For a while he succeeded, keeping his vision pinned on the action scenes.
a tale of dragons part 15
I've completely lost the ability to write good action scenes. it sucks. i just can't do it any more. i'll try to correct that in this chapter, but please, tell me what you really think about the fight scenes.
Getting Your Monies Worth
S: the movie enters an action scene and the music turns up loud and there are a lot of special effect sounds. sargon uses it as cover as he starts thrusting much harder now, still avoiding shoving too much, lest he shake the entire theater.
Toy for the Night
Lance felt the phone in his pocket go off right as the best action scene in the movie was starting. the slightly chubby aardwolf grumbled as he reached into his pocket, disturbing his boyfriend who had been pushing his head into lance's paunch.
Dinner And Dessert [Commission]
It was coming up to one of the best action scenes soon.
How I Met My Roommate
The entire time, even after the pizza arrived, we laughed at dumb action scenes, discussed what else had been going on in our lives the previous week, our hopes for the future, etc.
Oh, College: "writer" is not responding, please wait
Thus, expect a hiatus until my mind is less chaotic and focused on sex and violence than a fucking michael bay action scene, and i know more about my gender identity than i know about mexican soap operas.