The Persistent Dragon Hatches a Plan
With the help of some very appreciated criticism, i realized that the first chapters were kind of just a clusterfuck of poor storytelling and bad dialog.
The Ace of Spades
Little did i know at the time, that it was all going to turn into one giant clusterfuck.
Talke and his team
._ _ _ \*\*\*\*\* for eisser there wasn't much to say or think as the tiger recalled the events that had led up to the clusterfuck that had become the nightmare he was still trying hard to forget.
Alien vs Predator: Insemination Ch. 3: Two Man Army
"seems simple enough; just gotta head two or three clicks to the east, cut a path through the reactor, grab one of the spare operations shuttles, get back up into orbit, nuke this entire xeno clusterfuck, and be back off to earth in time for chow," taylor
Reaper Juniper Hill: Chapter 3
"it's still just a huge clusterfuck. i'm just not seeing it." "then maybe you should open your eyes." "..." "good talk." another pat on the shoulder and drake stood up to leave. jacob jumped up. "wait! what should i do?"
West for Despair, East for Hope
"i would rather call that a clusterfuck." she looks at the info screen. "three hundred klicks to the fleet. we can't make it, nyk." "i can land on water, and we'll wait for the rescue--" "still outside of yellow zone.
The Trash that Lurks in the Hearts of Possums
What a clusterfuck. where would you even find trash rat anyway? and why the hell are you still hanging out with ryan!?
Analog Pt. I
"three years of being stuck in a clusterfuck." the husky shuddered. "between mario... and the factory bombing." "oh god, i forgot about fucking mario." "i'd take the factory bombing shit over mario schleppi."
The Perfect Storm
"what a clusterfuck of a day," she muttered. "how's allen?" "he's better. i splinted his leg as best i could, but he'll need that evac sooner than later, i think he's busted up his nerves too.
...Et Mea Salvea
"this is a clusterfuck if i ever saw one, boss," one of his younger, more freely-tongued pilots commented on the squadron frequency. "yeah," the colonel agreed. he put his eyes forward.
One Fine Night
He remained silent for the next few minutes, eyes shut, body completely tense, and his mind a clusterfuck of emotions that he could barely keep under taps. did he really just say that? did he _really_ just say all of that?
Nomad (2023)
"you know, out of this whole clusterfuck, you were the only person who showed me and my son any niceness." ronnie remarked as he placed his paws on the table.