Void-Crossed
Please be gentle, but do give critique :) on a white sanded plain, in a dimension above our own, there exists an extraordinary spectral coliseum. nothing else exists here except the arena, and nothing else happens but the fights that occur within it.
College, Chapter 5
I did not, at first, recognize anyone in the room, but a few students stood around the pianists, taking notes as the instructor critiqued the performance in progress.
Rapture
Comments, critiques, your own opinion about the story is encouraged. this is simply my fantasy, and also therapy, in a way. to give me hope and to keep the bad thoughts away. never give up.
Hi, I'm Bunni Ver 2.0
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Punk'd Out
A punk tf written as a birthday present for renyard2001 over at fa: it was definitely a fun write using music as a hypnotic trigger~ as always, comments and critiques are appreciated!
The morning after the night before
All comments welcome, critiques, and bits you liked please say(if any!!)
Pokemon Crystal Pornlocke Chapter 2
This is also 18+ please don't read if you are under 18+ feel free to comment any critiques. pokemon is not owned by me but is owned by gamefreak and nintendo thumbnail image is not owned by me and belongs to gamefreak and nintendo pornlocke rules: 1.
Legal Limits 3: Happy Birthday Conan...
I wish i could talk to you and hear that sweet voice, wish we could watch movies or youtube and critique things as we go along, wish i could hear about your day...
Depravity - Pipefox
Comments, critiques, and suggested tags always appreciated. i also love faves and ratings. i'm open for commissions! check my profile. if you consistently enjoy my work, consider becoming a backer on my patreon, or you can buy me a coffee on my ko-fi!
Depravity - Zion
Comments, critiques, and suggested tags always appreciated. i also love faves and ratings. i'm open for commissions! check my profile. if you consistently enjoy my work, consider becoming a backer on my patreon, or you can buy me a coffee on my ko-fi!
Depravity - Beck
Comments, critiques, and suggested tags always appreciated. i also love faves and ratings. i'm open for commissions! check my profile. if you consistently enjoy my work, consider becoming a backer on my patreon, or you can buy me a coffee on my ko-fi!
What's the Measure of a Man? I Don't Know But My Tail is Three Feet Long
Artwork by the awesome negger comments and critiques are always more than welcome. # chapter 19: what's the measure of a man?