Vitani's Lesson.
I made a few adjustments to the first few paragraphs using the upload screen here at sf, but i'm gonna rework it on word for a while then re upload when done. )))) side notice: i worked on this for about 20 min, before passing out in the chair. >.< sorry,
We are the Shadows: Prologue
Enough of that though, i completely reworked the story from the ground up to be different so i hope you all enjoy and comment on my longest story.
It all Started with a Second Coffee Ch 5
He'd need to rework his angle right now and figure out a different approach for the future. "well, we do need to pack those up at some point today, right? you don't want to have to do another load in the dishwasher."
-ZOO - Off To the Races - Chapter Three -
Off to the races © cederwyn whitefurr chapter three – revised and reworked - 6th april, 2023 all rights reserved. _my master is angry with me – angry, disappointment and frustrated... i feel bad, truly i do!
Character Sheet: Eros.
Subject eros withstood the treatment and also quickly harmonized with the nanites, which in turn reworked his cells at the genetic levels, allowing for his bio-structure to be entirely based on redundant, easily replicable cells that would work at optimum
TAWOG: The Money Deleted Scene
This is a rework of the money: alternate ending. rated 13+ for suicide.
Hot Dino Girls Preview
When the weather lets up, i'll go back through and rework these windows a little better. maybe i can even get a stone drill and steel bolts from the base." “i can't ask you to do that, mr. ardavan.
Silent Invasion Part 1
(reworked version) # silent invasion thanks to @barefoot for helping with the story :) ---- i was bored. it was saturday and i'm on duty guarding a building, an empty building. as i do every weekend.
What's the Measure of a Man? I Don't Know But My Tail is Three Feet Long
At this point i'm just going to chalk it up to inadvertently reworking them from a different point of view. as for the ending, well... it came out well enough, but i was never really happy with it.
On the Rim, Ch 11: Missy in High Demand
The next two hours were spent working alongside cole in extracting the computer, placing it onto a newly fabricated computer terminal, and then manually reworking the processor to function in a way that facilitated research; ben proved to be exceptionally
The Not So Simple Life [reloaded] Chp 1: A meeting of minds, closer to when world colide
#2 of the not so simple life well its here the first scene from the reworking of my first series, this particular bit originally was only 300 words now its over 1600, and i feel good with it, as always point out what i did wrong in order to make me feel self
Pokémon: Darkest Taboo, Pt117
**“we have a psi team reviving the two brats, after that they reworked their memories.