Spiral Nebula - Chapter 26
Unfortunately i don't think this transition was very smooth but maybe in an edit version the chapter will transition a little more smoothly. across the desert of dried up planets were the scars of the battle that took place overhead.
Prologue and Chapter 1 Max and Luke
This is the edited version from darkawry and i greatly appreciate it.
The Revenge
(re-edited version) the alarm clock rang, the tone, that i've grown to hate, banging in my ears. slamming my paw down on the stop button the sound quickly died.
A Bunny Boy's Possessive Kitty
Max made edits to the video, and clipping out a few unnecessary things that ha been recorded and saved the edited version separately.
Desert Heat
(generic warning : must be 18 or up ...blaw blaw... blaw ) \*\* note \*\* this is the new edited version- that is i ran spell-check and fixed a few spots.\*\* a large brown minotaur surveys the horizon.
I'm Going to Hang
Let's start making the edited version with just the "good parts". and we'll stop occasionally so i can blow you or you can fuck my brains out.
Untitled Story
Word of warning, this is my first story, if there are any errors in it, please forgive, i was having a friend proofread it, but he never gave me the edited version. * * * it was a rather dark night tonight, the road empty ahead.
Second Draft of First Story
edited version of my first draft (things with weird names are in latin, they should be in italics but it didn't transfer) it's not pleasant being struck with lightning. neither is being trapped underwater for a minute straight.
Midnight swim
I heard about this contest so i thought i'd enter this edited version of this story, it is a few words more then it should be but i didn't want to damage the flow of it so i tried to cut only non essential things from it.
Zatha's linage -Edited
I plan on making an edited version, cutting gout some things, but no real changes, just some things removed. i really really hope you've enjoyed it.
Prolouge: Hatred
If you all read the first un-edited version then you didn't get this or a lot of little tid bits that were added.
Revenge Edited
#2 of revenged well this is now the edited version, changed the intro, made some difference into the yiff scene as well as the ending. enjoy. again not for anyone under 18. drake and manuel copyrighted by me.