Last Chance - Commission
His exclamation was so full of enthusiasm, so full of innocence. it was almost as though he didn't realize that she was slowly choking to death, trapped beneath the weight of the trap that he'd sprung.
Lewd times with Espeon
I jolted at espeon's exclamation, and suddenly i was back in our room, my face buried in her fur. despite my surprise, i kept stroking her; by now that action was automatic, and it would have taken more effort to stop.
Act Your Age at the Mall
All the comments he heard were exclamations about how adorable he was and what a big boy he was for helping his mommy throw away his yucky diaper. seeing his grouchy expression, mommy kneeled down the moment he returned to her and checked his diaper.
The Grease Trap - Part I "Dream On"
He exclamated with a burst as he realized he was supposed to be starting his interview now! wondering how long he spent in his marijauna induced sexual revelry, that time got so far away from him.
Portals - Chapter 1
Anything with all caps or too many exclamation points followed. growl!!! "shut the fuck up!" he yelled down at his aching stomach. growl... his belly answered.
[Cure] Living Art
She bit her lip, a wave of heavy sensation crashing into her, making her exclamation fade into a long throaty moan. suddenly all she could think about was finding something to test herself on. turning she walked down the road back to her house.
First day of school Part 1
Casey exclamed. the bell rung as soon as casey finished his sentence. everyone from division started going to their 2nd period class. "well i guess i'll see you at 4th then, if your not late" casey said picking up his book bag.
Helfer's Busy Day, Chapter 11
That exclamation came from nearer the door. helfer twisted his head around and watched that portion of the room, heart beating faster. if dicker wandered over past the door, he'd see the weasel easily.
Expectations Subverted
Indignantly the lord stepped towards him, mouth opening in protest, as barsaen opened his mouth to meet that protest with his own heated exclamation.
Nikki, the Smelly Schoolgirl
More students quickly caught on to the rotten smell, a mix of amused snickers, complaints, and exclamations of disgust escaping them.
You ARE a writer! : Srsly (2nd step on the road to success!)
It is examining every turn of phrase, every exclamation point and period and trying to determine why the author wrote it like that, what imagery and concepts and meanings this conveys, and whether you could do it better.
Zion: Light of the New Moon Part 2, Ch 4.5 Doen
Dillan objected, and would have continued if not for an exclamation from the wagons. the four of them raced to narissa's wagon, where haldyn stood with the tigress in his arms. "she's barely breathing!" he warned.