A Weekend Visit pt.1
Twenty minutes later, i was almost just about finishing up with my second revision of her paper. i laced my fingers together and stretched, leaning far back in the chair as i did.
After the Storm - Part 24 [The Visitors]
However, inspiration struck and i thought that i could improve the chapter, so i decided to revise it.
Reaching for the Stars - Chapter 28: A Panther and a Wolf
"sorry, i have revisions to do tonight." "too bad." the lion just laughed. "anyway, some guys caught your eyes lately?" he shrugged. "not really. why do you ask that?" "well, you didn't seem to have some chicks." andy slurped his soda.
Organized Crime- Chapter 1
Huge thanks to the help i received from draugr on my revisions :d enjoy, please comment as feedback helps me to become a better writer.
Control Freak
To revise the hell out of that, and now here is the watered-down version of that revision, which i decided was too violent.
#25 - Saddled With An Unstabled Partner
So long as it's legal, they'll approve it, and since he revised the marriage laws to allow for _'nonstandard partnerships'..."_ **neal:**"but...the horse is his excellency's property! how can this... _what?_ and what are these other papers?
Training session
#21 of stories a thing i wrote for someone that i thought i would have to revise multiple times to get their characters right but i got it in one so that's nice (edit note, never actually gave this a title before or after finishing it until now) it was training
a wolf and a vixen in love revised as a series
Just want to make one thing clear i own the rights to this story and i have revised it .blah blah anyway without any thing else to say i give you a wolf and a vixen in love chapter 1 it was a beautiful sunday morning ,and the young vixen was lying
The Lab: A Vore Adventure (Nov 2017)
[change] when being swallowed, another key press is required to actually move to "inside (predator)" [change] zsaarr's look at text lightly revised for typos and clarity. [change] paragraphs should always/mostly have breaks now.
"Daggers of Darkness" - Prologue
#6 of daggers of darkness, book 1, into the black here's the (revised) prologue for the first book of my sci-fi adventure series, "daggers of darkness, book 1, into the black".
Desperado: Introduction
I'm only going to upload the introduction first and see what people say about it before i (probably) revise the other chapters. everything i've written so far seems devoid of something, so please tell me your likes/dislikes, or any suggestions you have.
Chapter 3: How long?
I decided to pick this up again after so long i've likely skipped some details that should be carried on from the last chapter but i don't know if i'll be writing much soon so on and off let's call this the un-revised version that if it gets somewhere i'll