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Sinbad and Hasina Ch. 5 - Unity

critiques welcome. hasina let out moan after moan of ecstasy, sinbad rutting her brains out as he pounded into her in every position possible for the two. “fuck," moaned hasina huskily. “come on, sinbad, harder!"

Adult Content, Aroused, Balls, Blush, Camp, Character Development, Cock, Compassion, Consensual, Couple, Creampie, Cuddling, Cumming, Deep Penetration, Desert, Doggystyle, Dream, Erection, Explicit, Fantasy, Fellatio, Feral, Fingering, First Time, Foreplay, Gryphon, Gryphoness, Hard-On, Heat, Human, Interspecies, Kissing, Licking, Love, Lust, M/F, Nudity, Oral, Orgasm, Outdoors, Passion, Penetration, Penis, Penis licking, Presenting, Pussy, Romance, Rough Sex, Seductive, Sex, Shirtless, Story Progression, Story Series, Teasing, Third Person, Vagina, Vaginal, Vanilla, Virgin, Wet, Yiff, confession

A Quiet Afternoon on the Normae Coast

Both hans' and freja have their critique on his form but neither care to fix it, alard's future doesn't rely on his skill with a polearm, not with how much effort hans and freja have put into preparing their family for success.

Fantasy, HMOFA, Human, Medieval, Pregnant, SFW, Wolf, Wolfess

Moon Light

Comments and critique welcome at: [[email protected]](/cdn-cgi/l/email-protection)

Half-Dragon, Human, M/F, Oral, Tail Sex

A Terrible Truth

I just need critiquing so i can do better the next time i write a story. saphira and thorn a dragon-sized love story "why?" eragon shouted. "why does she have to be separated from me?

Dragon, M/F

The Cohen Icosahedron, Ch 26

"i can judge and critique enough to still hold this afternoon against you-- the viddin way or no, for humans, what you did was not okay."

Alternate Reality, Barbs, Character Development, Dragon, Family, Gryphon, Human, Humor, Ilsit, Love, M/M, Precum, Relationships, Sci-Fi, Science Fiction, Size Difference, Sorrow, Viddin, comfort, dilf, hand holding, loss, sympathy

A small town welcome, pt.2

Comments, compliments, critiques, insults, leave a comment. "names levi, nice to meet you cam" the line just kept running through cams head as he tried to make sense of what had happened.

Cum, Fox, Kangaroo, Locker Room, M/M, Oral, Outdoors, Story Progression, Uncut

Puppy Love Chapter 5

I have no idea how it will end, so any ideas, comments, and critiques are welcome. flames will be laughed at and discarded._ i rolled over to look at the clock by my bed. 1:24 a.m.

Adult Content, Anthro, Cheating, Human, M/F, Rottweiler, adultery

Hit & Run

Ps: don't be too ruthless with your critiques please, i do try my very best!

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Longing

critiques or criticism in any form is always welcomed the beast drew closer. it's size was mammoth, every step resonating a loud thud and crushing rustle from the grass pounded by it's feet.

Anthro, Anthro Brontosaurus, Anthro Dinosaurs, Anthro Tyrannosaurus, Azurethedragon, Brontosaurus, Chief Valor, Clean, Dinosaur, Friendship, Gay, Gay Relationships, Love, M/M, Male, Mammoth, No-Yiff, Reptilades, Reptilades (Anthro Dinosaurs), Scar, Scar (Anthro T-Rex), T-Rex, Tyi, jungle, scalies

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