The Fox, The Rat and The Beast (edited and improved)
New edited version of my story this is my story proluge, i submitted it before but it was a mess, so i edited, cleaned up and improved it the evening sunlight shown through the tree top as the smell of a wilderness of pine trees
Welcome to College part 1
Also please forgive me for the un edited version of my first attempt of this story i'm using microsoft word and its helping a lot any way i hoped you liked the edited version the next part would be a little hotter then this one and longer.
Revenge Edited
#2 of revenged well this is now the edited version, changed the intro, made some difference into the yiff scene as well as the ending. enjoy. again not for anyone under 18. drake and manuel copyrighted by me.
I'm Going to Hang
Let's start making the edited version with just the "good parts". and we'll stop occasionally so i can blow you or you can fuck my brains out.
Sarah\\\'s Story part 2
I'll be putting up edited versions of some of my old stories as well. when i get to them of course.
Erika Whitehoof - Chapter 1
#1 of whitehoof note: this should be my edited version of this story, fixing a few of the grammar problems. i still appreciate any aid in spoting them; i'm a terrible editor myself.
Ambition
#4 of poetry a slightly edited version to be pg. i think you can figure out where. written 2016. what do i want?
A Hope Shattered to Pieces (Chapter One)
Thanks to my not-so-furry friend jimmy for helping me continue to write out a couple things in this editted version. \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_
The Demise of a Knight, Part 1 of 2
This is the edited version of a rp log between a good friend and i, who chooses to remain anonymous, for the time being. keeping the story in this form saves me a lot of time, and i find it still interesting to read.
Zatha's lineage-Uncut
I plan on making an edited version, cutting gout some things, but no real changes, just some things removed. i really really hope you've enjoyed it.
Highschool- Fitting in and Living Life Ch 3: Catching the Bus and Jumping Hurdles
#3 of hsfiall this is the edited version of chapter three. there are major differences here so please send me your thoughts, if you are insulted by the idea of homosexual relationships, complain somewhere else.
On The Seventh Day of Kinkmas
He agreed, and when he finally got the edited version back, the bastard had left a crude note informing him that he owed seven hours on the chair.