The Dovahkiin's Lair

critisisms and suggestions are welcome. the dovahkiin's lair by lostsoul666 the dragonborn slid off his horse shadowmere, and readied himself for the task ahead.

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Intellective

Comments and constructive critisism are very welcome! =) many thanks. -ren

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The House Dahan, Chapter IX: A Glorious day

No really, don't pull any punches on constructive critisism, it's the only way to improve as a writer.** blablabla, diclaimer stuff here, please read tags and please enjoy!

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Thieves (Chapter 4): Reunion

The beautiful cover image was done by none other than abd please remember that comments are always appreiciated, be they praise or critisism wet sounds could be heard echoing around the pitch black room.

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Thieves (Chapter 1): Finding Maneki

Comments are always welcome be they praise or (keep it constructive please) critisism. all was quiet on the castle grounds. a large castle not too far from a large village set against a mountain and flanked on two sides by forest.

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Thieves (Chapter 3) Bartholomew's Castle

And it is my sincere hope and wish that those that do read it take the few seconds it takes to also leave a comment letting me know what you thought about it; whether it be praise or critisism.

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The Gate-Way: Chapter 3 – Not In Kansas Anymore

Once again all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated.

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Chapter Seven: He's a Witch!

He asked several questions regarding my expectations and the inspiration for my method, no matter how much he felt the need to critisize.

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The Gate-Way: Chapter 6 – A Painful Past

As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.

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Ch. 1: A new home

Constructive critisism is appreciated. ^^

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Escape into Dragon's Love Story I of III of the Dragon's Love Trilogy

"i am riddiculed enough by my kind for my small size, i do not need to be critisized by you human. besides i am still very young and have more growth to take through my years. in time i will tower over you." she speaks again before fluttering her wings.

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