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So Young, So Dear

I would love so critique. a sorta-personal thing... about my dearest childhood friend. she's the best friend i ever had, and she's not that person anymore. she just doesn't know it.

Clean, Poem, personal

Avery’s Awakening

Please feel welcome to critique this as harshly as you feel compelled to. i'm no flake, and i'm always looking to improve my writing.

Adventure, Armageddon, Beach, Bittersweet, Dark, Disaster, Drama, Emotional, Exhibitionism, Fantasy, Friendship, Gender Shifting, Gender Transformation, Harsh, Light Nudity, Magic, Mature, Mild Erotica, Mild Violence, New World, No-Yiff, Novel, Nude, Plot Development, Post-Apocalyptic, Raptor, Reptile, Sea, Sorrow, Story, Story Series, Suggestive, Thriller, Tragedy, Transformation, Violence (Not In Yiff)

Morsel

This poem is a vignette that features the exploits of an overeating food critiquing pig and a chance encounter with a tailor rooster.

Avian, Belly, Chubby, Fat, Fat furs, Feeding, Food, Gaining, Gallic, Gay, Men, Obese, Pig, Rooster, bellies, feeder, fetish, furs, gainer, kink, porcine

Smuggling Parasites, Chapter 4

: thanks to shaylor for the invaluable critique, proof-reading, and editing. disclaimer!!! this story contains some weird stuff, please check the tags before reading!

Alien, Cunt Boy, Egg Laying, Eggs, Male Pregnancy, Oviposition, Pregnancy, Solo, parasite

Neoteny is Monotony

April the 3rd is the day when she took off her shirt and I discovered that my dog-headed wife of twenty years had testicles for boobs. I was 19. I was married about a year before actually being born and so was "she" (if you could still call her that,...

Baby-punching, Breasticles, Dog, Fandom critique, Fox, Gay, Obscene, dumptruck, nuts

Disclaimer

I would be grateful for suggestions and critique, as long as they are constructive. and to repeat myself: i know i have taken lots of artistic freedoms with the lore... so to all you hardcore tabletop warriors... please, just have fun...

WH40K, disclaimer

Muscle Growth - The Quest for More

In either case, please note that since this is my first ever foray into the field, i will **greatly** appreciate any and all forms of comments, critique, and suggestions.

Ball Growth, Cock Growth, Horse, M/M, M/solo, Male, Minotaur, Muscle Growth, Solo

Around the Bonfire

Life is dull, and boring, and each day passes slower than the previous for daniel, until an acidic critique on a story he has read stirs his attention.

Anatomically Correct, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Aroused, Bear, Canine, Character Development, Cock, Cum, Ejaculation, Excerpt, Feet, Fox, Friendship, Gay, Knot, Lust, M/M, M/solo, Male, Masturbation, Orgasm, Paws, Penis, Plot Development, Romance, Seed, Sex, Sheath, Shower, Shy, Solo, Story, Yiff, geek

Feyrahl, SF Ch 3.3

"very well... just be gentle on your critique."

Bear, Character Development, Fantasy, Human, Isekai, Lion, Lynx, Medieval, Will-they-won't-they, intimacy, reader-driven, song

Husky Surprise

critique is welcome, but keep that in mind. **_!warning!:_** _contains gay sex between an anthro fox and feral husky, if you're not into that kind of thing, then don't bother reading the story!

Anal, Anatomically Correct, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Bedroom, Cock, Cum, Dick, Doggystyle, Fucking, Gay, House, M/M, Male, Masturbation, Naughty, Quadruped, Zoophilia

Prologue: The Vessel and the Immortal

Please, leave a comment if you are at all interested, or pm me if you have a critique! cheers! please note that this is a mature story and not for the easily offended. credit to vallhund for the awesome ref sheet/icon!!

Canine, Dark Fantasy, Fire, Flintlock, Gothic_fantasy, Horror, Lovecraftian, Novel, Prologue, Short, Snuff, Steam Punk, Steampunk, Story, Suicide, Very Short, Wolf, darkness, not porn

Jamie Character Sketch

Yesterday, my friend littlebat posed a weekend writing challenge in a telegram group i'm in, and critique is optional.

Goat, Jamie Bockmann, Pro wrestling, Scene sketch, Sketch, Wrestling, character sketch, world building