Smokin (Story only Version)
Please comment after you have read all the way through before critiquing. and i don't like haters. so don't hassle me.
Team Smartz Ch.2 - Cold as Eisbecher
-------------------------------- so yah, here's chapter two of the fantastical adventures of antwon and penny, and yes i know that this one may actually be shorter than chapter one but . . . what can i say, i hope that chapter three is longer, as always, critiques
Renamom
If you would be so kind, might you read through this short passage, and critique my work? critique the hell out of it?
Gwen's Test
Comments are good, as are critiques. i know my grammar sucks sometimes, so don't bother critiquing me on that. otherwise, have fun!)
Serenifi: The Movie: The Remake: Part 2
"cause various networks won't let me critique their works!" "yeah, by 'critique', you mean 'ranting on and on about cartoons you don't like like only your thought matter', right?"
Airy Thoughts
For once, that voice of critique from inside of her had no retort, and aqua sat back smugly. her hand stroked the curve of her tummy. that nexus of doubt had come from somewhere, after all.
Project_Demise - Excerpt
I ask only for the harshest of critiques, because when my book is finished i'll have to deal with even harsher critics. so give me a totally honest, no holds barred critique. i'm a big boy. i can handle it.
"BLEU" - Harmony
The most common critique to the mbti is the misidentification, and even this one has many layers. personally, i believe that i have dug close to the bottom for the mbti, deeper than many already.
Cupcakes Re-done (Rough Draft)
She said she tried her hand (or, well, hoof) at sewing, and wanted rarity to critique her work. she happily agreed, and went to say goodbye to sweetie belle, her younger sister. "sweetie belle! sweetie belle! " rarity called.
When Nature Calls #1
Comments are appreciated, seeing as this is a first time escapade for me and critiques or acolades are cool. critiques and acolades are also cool. yeah, word. if you think it's worth it i'll write more.
Can't Keep My Eyes Off of Him (Part 1/8)
This is my first story/fic, so please be gentle when critiquing me (if you critique me, that is...i kind of hope you do!). this is just one chapter of 8. i try to update in 2 days or less, so be patient! thanks for reading!
Winter Breeze Ch. 6 Pt.1
As usual, critiques, suggestions, violent reactions, opinions, and comments are welcome here. so don't be shy to share whatever's in your mind. i would appreciate that. i don't always make cliff hangers. but when i do, i suck at it.