Hero Chapter 3

I tried to fix that, but the entire original was in present tense...so i might have missed something here or there while converting it to past tense. side note: like i said before, this is my "mary sue" story, i think.

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Swole Spider - Commission for Umbreonhyper

past tense had never felt so liberating. "fuck... saying it out loud feels weird. i still can't believe this shit is happening." "believe, my dear friend. dreams can and do come true, for you as they have for me." "yeah, we'll see about that.

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Snippets: A Look Into the Twisted Creative Process of a SoFurry Author

His attention drawn to his thing/unit, he began playing with himself now [don't know how to construct the tense for when he began playing with himself; i need something meaning "at this point in the story", "now" doesn't work because the stroy is past tense

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Rengoku Chapter 3

She held out the notebook, "what the heck kind of past tense is this?" gio chuckled more, "just, leave it without tense, it's an informal sentence."

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Dad Camp Day 1

"oh, past tense," said hagan, "my apologies." "it's alright," said elliot with a kind smile, "it's been a while since she passed. i've made a pretty successful dad on my own. but, my daughter had to twist my arm to come out here."

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Counter Earth Chronicles Chapter 47: The News No One Wanted To Hear

"that is about to be in the past tense!" she floored it and charged at the vehicle who dodged at the last minute spinning them out in our wake. chester conner recovered and started the pursuit.

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Don't Leave Me - S1EP10 - Ashes To Ashes...

I made it very clear to her that i was using past tense. "you don't really mean that do you? i mean we don't really know much of anything about this. what if it was just some drunken mistake?"

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College Life: Chapter 9

Diego: "yes, 'accepted' note the usage of the past tense. that 'acceptance' wouldn't last long. needless to say, he did something that would forever destroy our relationship and any compassion i had for the emmanuelite church." there was a pause.

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Axel & Rena Part 14 By: Renatamer

That's all past tense," axel said glancing sideways at blackrenamon. "what happened that's made such a change in you?"

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Every Single Stroke (A How Royalty Works Story)

The past tense in the cat's question didn't slip his attention. "alright then," chuckled the cat and smirked at him. "no. you're not. i don't think so, at least. but to answer your concerns, you must forgive us the precautions.

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I'll Do Anything!

I wasn't sure why he was using the past tense - he was still using me, his throbbing dick holding me firmly in place as he continued to_splurt_ into my bloated belly. he seemed to know my answer, even though he could only hear sobs.

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Unicorn's Spice

._ _ _ yes, it was innocent, in the past tense. as he came to the edge of the property line his tongue felt dry as he was nearly shaking when he saw the flash of white in the brilliant fall foliage.

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