#35 of poetry
some will question why i just didn't edit the old one. the answer is because we can all see how my writing has developed since i became a small child.
i knew that i had to revise this poem, i just never found the right words.
Poetry
I gave myself a deadline to submit this and i rushed a bit near the end, so comments about edits especially welcome.
all the characters are completely fictitious.
Adult on teen, Anal, Anal Sex, Anal penetration, Anatomically Correct, Ass, Barbed Penis, Chastity, Chastity cage, Cum, Cum shot, Exhibitionism, Father, Father son sharing, First Time, Forced chastity, Fucking, Gay, Husky, Implied Incest, Knot, Knotted cock, Knotting, M/M, Male/Male, Nipple Sucking, Original Characters, Pawing, Piss, Piss tasting, Puma, Rim job, Rimming, Son, Sucking cock, Tailhole, Teen/teen, Unlocking, Voyeurism, cum in ass, cum in mouth, cum inside, sucking, sucking off, tail hole, tail up
I tired to edit this one more due to the lack of editing on my other stories. so please give me feed back. thanks and enjoy!
edited on 2/10/12
david was at home watching television with his wife alexis.
Adult, Anal, Cum, Incest, Knot, M/M, M/M/M, M/solo, Oral, Pre-cum, Tie, Yiff, lube, porn, tail hole
He had managed to hack the digital world and is editing its code. in particular, he's editing my code.
"so by doing this, you can make me extra powerful? more so than any other creature?"
Digimon, Gulimon, M/F, Mind Control, NSFW, Oral, Renamon, Straight, Takato Matsuda, Vaginal, hacking
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**\*edit\*** now not only is there fazbear crew 1.0 and 2.0 (toy crew), there are _three more...
Awesome, Bonnie, Chica, Crap, Five Night's at Freddies 2, Five Nights at Freddies, Fnaf, Foxy, Game, Gonna, Horror, Is, Pizzeria, freddy, holy, scary, sequel, theory, this
This problem is not so bad to new posts, it becomes really bad with old posts, because who would edit the tags of hes olders posts to add the "cartriges"?
Improvement, Tags, system