Beginner's Luck
I've dealt with that before, and fuck, nothing hits my dysphoria harder than someone obviously over-compensating for the fact that their inner monologue is probably screaming '_he's wearing a binder. he has a pussy!_' at the same time.
New Energy (Teaser)
It was like his coaching inner monologue was teasing him. he hadn't felt a genuine sense of satisfaction so much as he curbed his appetite.
The Party That Disappeared - Part 1 (Vore Story)
And, when the goat swallowed again, nick only continued his weird inner monologue of what was happening to him. he could feel the goat's long, probing tongue playing with his paws, as they were now only inches away from disappearing behind his lips.
The Ant Hill
Christine's inner-monologue erupted into a torrent of curses and cussing as the lone ant began to walk away. yes, her body did begin to move towards the exit.
An Interview with Paper_Paws
I tend to use the opposite strategy, which is not separating inner monologue from narration at all, so that the character weaves in and out.
Doggy Tongue Auteur
_i really can't believe i'm doing this shit,_ thought desmond, his inner monologue far more coarse than he would ever dare speak.
The Bus Ride.
His inner-monologue began. "he's just so goofy and likable. gawd, and he's so slender, and that pale brown fur, he's like a creamy coffee colored dream." wesley was a runner, caleb liked runners. so slender and soft and beautiful.
Fiery Encounter
Luna said to herself, apparently thinking that inner monologue wouldn't suffice to suppress her anger. after sighing from sheer annoyance, she eventually focused on her mission, staring at the nearby trees in the open.
Delicious Dessert
_ she chided herself in her inner monologuing. "whatever" she dismissively snapped "i'll be looking forward to seeing what part of me you've decided to stay in~" .... _aaaaahhhh hm?
Entih Sleeps Over
Having cleared up with his inner monologue, jeff headed back to the bedroom to find that entih was already well asleep.
Dark's story (part 2)
His inner monologue was cut short when his pupils finally constricted. and he saw he was in a hospital, or something similar. no it wasn't a hospital. they don't have plastic walls and normally doctors aren't allowed to smoke while operating.
Jack of Diamonds: A Jack Crane Story
I never thought danger got me hard, but--- the tip of the gunbarrel digging into the fuzz just under my ear and a thickly-accented voice quickly returned me from the fugue of my inner monologue. "where is it?" "where's what?"