The Apocalypse: Edited Version; first eight chapters.
Well, it's finally done; an edited version of the first apocalypse. most of the story remains the same, only adding a few things here and there to make it flow better. for those who have already read this story as i posted it, there's not much point in re-reading
Mouse Porn - edited version
Mouse Porn By pyrostinger In a low, sudden hum, the vibrator sprang to life in Emma's paws. The brown mouse lay on her bed, slowly turning over the featureless phallus, trying to remember when the last time she had a real one between her legs. The...
Summer with Leomon: Rachel (Mother) Edited Version
Rachel woke up early to check up on her son... and also to go to work. Rachel worked as an editor for a newspaper. She had to usually go early and get started and then she would have to stay late to finish up final touches. She also did little jobs for...
2057: The Death of Marshal (Edited version)
edited version, all legal issues apply. 2057: the death of marshall.
What I've become: Safety No More, edited version
#1 of what i've become edit: i have replaced the text of the original piece with the new edited version. this version is the best that i can make it.
What I've Become: Love at Last, edited version
#2 of what i've become edit: as with the first chapter, i have replaced the text of this chapter with an updated, edited version. i am also diligently working on the next chapter, so keep an eye out for it.
Making Tracks (edited version)
I noticed the footprint the other day. It wasn't like any I had seen around here, the print having crushed some of the underbrush down into the mud clearly. I started paying a little more attention each time I went out, and a few days later I found...
Part 1; Callisto's temporary home.
Hope you liked the edited version of part one, if it needs any more fixing let me know.
Oh Fuck!
I'm really sorry about this-i uploaded a crappy version, tried to delete it and failed and left it empty =( here is a much-edited version...hopefully i'll upload an 'oh fuck v.2' that had my origional idea in it.
Please teach us princes! Enter the kung-fu tiger! [EDITED VERSION~~]
The edited version is way more enjoyable, specially to native english speakers, i didn't know a proof read could make such a difference ^^v anyway, hope you just enjoy it even more!
Chelsea's Bonadge Fetish
That night, ginger watched the kinky incest porn, albeit the post-editing version. "my god; she knows her place well," she teased. "so you aren't mad we filmed this," asked mark. "no, i'm confused on how hardcore chelsea is at times," she said.
Amura Chapter 1 Amura's Depature
Please follow this link to read the edited version.** [amura part 1](%5c) thank you. _darkfang magus_.