Havana or Hell, part four
I had no sense of my own body size, i could have been an insect or a leviathan, but i knew i would squeeze through that crack and re-enter the human world. with a roar, i was born in that back alley.
Offer
"but that makes absolutely no sense!" the hyena's voice became squeaky, "friends are supposed to help you! we're roommates for crying out loud. i pay half the rent. i have to sleep next to you and listen to your god-awful snores.
The Depravity of Dragons 2: The Pleasures of Peril
no sense of space. no sense of anything but the occasional scream of his own thoughts, and even that was losing its shock value.
Dragon Overlord, 2 | by Draconicon
no sense of space. no sense of anything but the occasional scream of his own thoughts, and even that was losing its shock value.
Boy by the Cliff
It made no sense, no sense at all. so liking boys made him weird? so being a bit girly made him a freak? then he'd happily be a freak, even if somewhere inside was screaming he was scared and wanted to be accepted.
SENTIENCE - Chapter Two - Contact
This beast made no sense to me. "what are you?" i whispered to myself, straining my eyes to see more. instantly, the creature's eyes bore straight in my direction. more intense light emanated from it, this time pointed at me.
Bound In Beast Flesh -- The Unlikely
"there is no sense of peace, in what i do now." those words leave your lips, as you stand before her, clad in armor. now you draw your blade--you must, it is the oath you have sworn. you've seen it, time and again.
Dawn of A New Day Deleted Chapter 1
no sense of courage or determination, none of the powers that she possesses, none of that.
Editing
I will fix sentences that make no sense, move paragraphs around, and correct grammar errors that make me sound like a fifth grader. draft 3 (and beyond): this draft is where i begin to polish my writing.
Scythe and Skin
It was obviously an ancient item and why she dragged it around with her made no sense, it also seemed far heavier then it should have, the top had been digging a trail behind her against the sands she crossed.
La Cucaracha
sense making a mess from hitting something at high velocity).
Rising Anew-Chapter 3, part 2-
"well no sense standing around i guess, lets go." she said grumpily. she was not all that sure about this little adventure purrma's letter was sending them on, but she knew she had to stay with narcenac.