Writing Tips vol. 4
Try to visualize their thought process and feelings, then put that down on paper. this is where things such as fragments and power sentences come in. thoughts and emotions aren't necessarily going to be ordered and structured, much like dialogue.
excerpt of You Are Free
However, it didn't take more than a few thought processes for me to realize that my fist hurting so bad, and how parts of both halves had indentations toward the break, could only mean one thing. "...d-did i... do that?"
The Fate That Befell Yndyr: Chapter One
The shock of the system shut down sparked a thought process into my system when i was parted from the computer. when the memory resumes i will have already crash landed on the planet yndyr.
When I met a jackalope...
"the thing just laughed again and said, 'problem in your thought process there fox. you gotta catch me first, and ain't no critter on earth fast enough to catch a jackalope.'
[REWRITE] The Boogies Parts 1-5
Character touches, thought processes and more. i did these first five as a test run, but we'll see if and what i do more. links to each part are included, so you can follow along.assume this thing as non canon.
The Old Boss
You never knew how long you'd be conscious of what was going on--sometimes you'd black out as soon as you hit the stomach lining...sometimes he'd keep your thought processes going till you were nothing more than a pile of shit in a toilet.
Coell 4 - Terms and Conditions
That core had connections to every part of her electronic brain, not just simply responding to queries but a part of her very thought processes and emotional responses.
Sora's Grand Adventure - Chapter 3
She started to run away but sora (acting more on natural urges and reflex than actual intelligent thought process) grabbed her tail in his teeth and pulled her to the ground.
One Lucky Cub
She stopped her thought process when she realized she was thinking of having sex with a child. she was disgusted by herself but couldn't hide the fact that her nipples had gone stiff and her loins were burning at the thought.
The Mushroomed Kingdom: A Lakitu's Friends
Sure, i was still hard as a rock, but that fact really wasn't hindering my thought processes so much any more. climbing back into my new cloud, i turned once more to the two troopas who had helped me get settled in, in more ways than one.
Tris and the Dragon
The hare gasped as his thought process was interrupted by a slick hot cockhead starting to spread his tailring, spurting pre ahead of itself to smooth the way in.
Rise To Power Chapter 1
After an hour what's left of cole's thought processes figure at the vibrators while keep her constantly stimualted but at the edge of orgasm with no hope of cumming.