Writing Tips vol. 4
If they're happy and excited, a lot of their speech can be punctuated with exclamation points. try to take into account their emotions and how it would affect their speech.
Interlewd
He let his tongue press deeper into her folds, the thick appendage probing inwards and earning several more breathless exclamations from his partner.
The Dead and the Desmodontinae
She punctuated this exclamation with a series of angry sceeches and shrieks. "i did no such thing!" said petru, licking diaemea's neck, "under my spell you practically begged me to be your lover."
Cubinioa -3- Not-a-thulu
The mouse's eyes roll up into his head and with grunted exclamation he empties his balls right there. the thick splatters plaster the front of his robes and splash across the deck as he falls forward with a thud.
Nightmarish Dreams
When she realized his exclamation, she grabbed for the satchel that held her dagger and her ishi, only to find it missing. she tries to calm herself before calling to her adoptive parents. "mother! father! wake up!" no response. she calls out again.
Twinks Across America: Ch. 41 - Delaware
At first, i almost replied with too many exclamation marks. my dick almost made the decision more than my brain often tried doing. then, i thought more pragmatically about it. he wanted me to choke him during sex.
"Bonk, Bonk!" [Clown TF]
He almost cried out, but at the last moment turned her satisfied exclamation into a long hiss. no point falling at the finish line. the condom bulged.
No Rest for the Weary
The drakka made an involuntary panicked exclamation and flicked her tail sharply--the impact sent whatever had grabbed her tail flying away, sliding across the tiled floor.
Hive Ch. 2
_a few heads turned at the exclamation; she hadn't been able to stifle it before it escaped her lips; he'd given the slightest shift, and the entire thing had _throbbed _beneath her hand. it was real. all of it.
A Wish Gone Astray
He was making quite a bit of noise other than his little exclamations and noticing this, he suddenly made himself silent. all around him were trees and little filters of light coming in through the branches and of course, the pressing silence.
The Little Harem 5
"i'm--" lauren couldn't even get the full exclamation out. she started wriggling, her arm latching on kailey while her other hand grabbed brittany's thigh.
Emolga's new Friends
But since pikachu was still injured from his resent battle, he shouted with a pained exclamation, which made her catch herself before starting to cry.