The White Robe Chapter 24
There were all the revisions highlighted, and they were right where he expected them to be, but when he looked back through the revisions, there was only one revision to the values he cared about, and the history showed it as blank, as if nothing had
Springtime (Revision)
Mooch sat on the forest floor, back legs spread wide and back against a large tree. His tail was curled upward, concealing his tailhole. His thick, but short cock stood at full mast, exposed to the cool autumn air. Humphrey slowly walked over to him,...
The Tale of Rikama (Working Title)
Every revision will be released here, even the finished version. this particular revision is unedited, and was not proofread. it was written solely to see how much i could do in a couple hours, and the quality of rushed work.
Reigning Revision
Brenan took one last check at his equipment, seeing if everything was in order. Spyglass? Grappling hook? Lockpicks? All set and ready as far as the nobleman was concerned. Some late night espionage was the primary goal for Brenan tonight, a chance to...
Foursome Fledgling Study Group
As they revised various topics, knaster also got a chance to look over the recent homework and quiz results for the other three fledglings.
School's in Session
Hennessey looked up from the sodden wolf across his desk, and said to the principal "so, i think after this revision, she might pass biology".
The Magnum Opus - Chapter 5
_new objective: defeat the revised johannes reynoldus_ _new objective: defeat the revised willis reynoldus_ _new objective: defeat the revised nils reynoldus_ there was some comfort in the knowledge that whoever was giving him these objectives, it was not
SCENTS AND SPILLAGE PART 2
************* SCENTS AND SPILLAGE PART 2 Big Mac Celestia Luna Duke Omelliah ******** Mac awoke on his back, staring at the white chest of princess Celestia, who was occupied in licking all around his huge erect cocktip. She slurped and slopped drool...
= Prologue: Dreams of Kingdom Past =
With a loud boom, a purple hand-shaped bolt flashed down and struck him._ * * * =subject to revision at any time until further notice=
Taming the Badger -- Revised
Aside from adding a new intro scene to do some world building, i've also revised the core story itself cause boy did it need a tune up.
A New Brother - Part 18
It was only due to drake's handling of his revision schedule and plans that troy believed he was never held back a year or two.
Chapter 4: Vera
After several hours of studying, revising and doing homeworks, momchil decided to take a break. he laid down on his bed, closing his eyes for a second, sighing quietly. he got ready for sleeping.