The Gam3 - Chapter 1
There was incredible detail in the very ground and the skies. the cobblestones felt so _real_ and even the fabric of his clothes was amazingly detailed.
Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
So the advantage of 'telling' is that you can summarize details that slow things down too much, preventing your story getting bogged down in unnecessary detail.
The Walk from Darkness to Light: Part 1
I will, again, go into more details in the proper sections. now, as we resemble both men and canines, what is the difference? that is, what is the physical representations?
Large Scale Developments: Part 5
Pushing the laden trolley into the kitchen area, mike's gaze was drawn to the remarkable details of the expansive industrial kitchen.
Camp Carnal
He held her down into his lap while his cock jerked hungrily, every twitch and jerk recorded in jealous detail.
The Mercurius Express — Chapter 3
It detailed the passengers staying in the coach, as well as details of their nationality, species, point of travel and destination. "looks like you have to interview eleven people."
Writing Tips vol. 4
Anyhow, i came up with a few more ideas that i either haven't covered before, or haven't covered in as much detail.
Crossing Bridges
He remembered the loving voice of cody teasing him in detail. but now it wasn't cody, it was the lion, that studly, different fur, about to finish deep inside of fen's eager, ready depths. "cum inside me!"
Zim pets Part One
It showed something that made this young dragon interested so much, the character of the anthro red dragon on the screen with a detail on a blank below it.
A Secret Memory
I have no picture of what happened and i wish desperately to remember every detail so i must find a way to come up with at least a thousand words with which to describe my memory.
Accidental Acension
He shared the details with his brother who was glad that he was excited and also that he was being forced to work with someone else for a change.
Tiger Story Chapter 2
I will detail the rest of the details once you wake up but for now i have to make sure you are ready for the long trip," the tiger says as he holds the bunny close to him.