Firedancer 3: the Lesson
Pyrrhi awoke with a start as sunlight quickly flooded the room. His paw shifted up to rest over his chest, the familiar thud of his heart seeming to travel up to his sensitive ears. "It's Midday." Rana's voice called from near the previously draped...
Great movie I miss the 70´s
I just watched Tarzoon Shame of the jungle a.k.a Jungle burger it was awesome I hadn´t laughed that hard since they stopped the re runs of the Fresh prince of Bel Air and Full house. It was a sexy Sharknado it was so bad it was hilarious my type of...
Healing
Ayle yanked the kobold spear from Rith's punctured armor, tearing a fair amount of flesh back with it. The wolf let out a wordless moan of agony as the gryphon worked by the light of his staff. "Hold still, Rith. I can't - Oh never mind." Ayle set a...
A Taste of Furry
People seldom write elaborate critiques for bad stories. his was big. big means good. every law that involved size confirmed this theory. screw fear.
Life-Like Ice Part 1: Diego
The rest of the critiques went pretty much the same. no one left out crying like the upperclassmen said.
Sins + Virtues Part 1: His Slothful Daughter
The time on Rich's alarm clock showed 9:00 when he woke up, this was the second time that week that he was late. Ever since his wife, Molly, was promoted at her job she had to work late hours meant that there was very little time for any fun that they...
Indian Summer
I know a lot of people consider themselves to be natives of this country, and I for one will never argue against it. It doesn't matter in the long run. Knowing where you came from is great, but knowing where you're going is a far...
Renamom
If you would be so kind, might you read through this short passage, and critique my work? critique the hell out of it?
Serenifi: The Movie: The Remake: Part 2
"cause various networks won't let me critique their works!" "yeah, by 'critique', you mean 'ranting on and on about cartoons you don't like like only your thought matter', right?"
"BLEU" - Harmony
The most common critique to the mbti is the misidentification, and even this one has many layers. personally, i believe that i have dug close to the bottom for the mbti, deeper than many already.
With Royalty.
_Project Renegade. _ Classified level _Blue_, the code meant for the Doctor's eyes only. Not even Snively knew of its existence. It was designed to be the ultimate war machine in the Empire. From Prow to Stern the...
Can't Keep My Eyes Off of Him (Part 1/8)
This is my first story/fic, so please be gentle when critiquing me (if you critique me, that is...i kind of hope you do!). this is just one chapter of 8. i try to update in 2 days or less, so be patient! thanks for reading!