Don't Look Now

Anyway, enough talking. enjoy the....uh, talking. yes, another dialogue heavy chapter, sorry. despite being a short journey, on the drive to wendy's house jake found himself unable to stop fidgeting. he was nervous, his limbs tight and heart racing.

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Learning to Swim - Part IV

It's a tad dialog heavy but i also just tend to be that way sometimes. there's a lot of branching out here and it's fun developing these characters. anyway, i hope you enjoy the continuation of the story.

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Jayden, Chapter 3

#3 of the halfblood chapter three (duh) this is my first dialogue heavy chapter, so any tips there would be helpful...

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A ghostly existence

Just to get one thing clear this work is entirely non-canon and will be very dialog heavy. so i don't want to receive too many comments about the storyline not making sense.

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MHO - Cult of the Crimson Isles - Chapter 3

Pretty dialogue heavy, but i promise there's action on the horizon! please remember to leave a comment to share any thoughts you have about this chapter! i can only grow with feedback!

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Unexpected Visit

Wrote this in more of a play scene style which means this story is more dialogue heavy and has less setup with short descriptions.

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The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

dialogue tags are too easily replaced by something that actually adds to the story, such as an action, a facial expression, a spot of description, or a character's opinions. just for the record, i write extremely dialogue-heavy fiction.

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50 Shades of Cream Chapter 2 (Tails x Sally x Vanilla)

Gaging slightly at the base she still kept her composure however and slowly reversed back up to the tip before releasing him again "only thing is you won't know which one of us you're fucking" speaking heavy and distorted half sentences as his mind battled

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xar (casual)

And nhen (a karraa / rat). it's a very modern setting with a lot of similarities to earth, but still displaced in a distant universe, so it should be pretty relatable at its core. i also wanted to focus more on description and immersion, since i like to be dialogue-heavy

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Mystic Heart Odyssey - Chapter 12

A bit more dialogue heavy here, but should help shed some light on the land lykou and kuna have found themselves in- and the dangers that may lay ahead of them.

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Black Meridian 04: Borderlands

This one is a bit longer than the others, and it's very dialogue heavy. but it felt wrong to break it up into other chapters, it's all a series of moments that play into one another so i'd rather post 6000 words and retain that authenticity.

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