Sorrow and Joy (Prologue)
The fight scene could be a little longer but i wanted to keep it short and quick. not to do to much damage to each other.
To Follow My Heart Ch3.
I'm not good on fight scenes but i tryed, hope you all enjoy. ch. 3 a big mistake.
A Short Walk to the Past
"oh, poo; it was just getting into the big fight scene at the end." "too late; we're almost there." i had thought we were already there.
A Ballbuster in Sheep's Clothing
Sexy fight scenes are really hard to write well d: "i-i don't know if i can do this." "you totally can!" amber gave her fellow female's arm a reassuring squeeze.
Streams of Confidence 9
Dd had sent in some requests for further growths and temporary tfs from one species to another - he really was hung up on the tf stuff compared to the others - while servile asked her if he could get something of a fight scene, showing her all sweaty and sexy
Emerald Maiden Chapter 1: Hunger
Immediate draw wondering what exactly is going on, who and what the main character is, basic fight scene to establish some more about them. no massive exposition dump, for one; i hate tell-not-shown exposition dumps.
Lost the Bet
-- the tv was blaring out a fight scene. cally was staring blankly at the screen, not really watching at all. pyra - who was watching her carefully from the other end of the sofa - could tell her mind was on other things.
shane-the pit
The end authors note-this was a request that i found most intriguing to do. given my limited skill at fight scenes, i wish to thank deyna otter for his writing of them and his skillful editing of the finished work. i figured that, tragically, there would
Tales From Apartment 232 - Part 12
Called the director as i was just finishing up a brilliant fight scene. i nodded, and sighed. i was tired from a days work.
Gaslight
Her breathing grew heavy. They had chased the rat into a corner. Mnemos had just fallen down a hole that RNG had opened up under her like a trapdoor. Bringing out her great big pigeon wings to slow her fall, she retracted them after having reached...
A Friend's Sorrow
He would probably have stared much longer at me, if the movie didn't just showcase an awesome sword-fighting scene, where the bear protagonist put his sword right through the throat of his first victim
Breeding a Future: Chapter 7
I'd love some feedback on the fight scene if possible, please! thanks again to eric aquasia for commissioning!