As The Night Cums
I hoped that you like this its my first story ever so if you want some pointers would be nice. i really want to hear what you think about it. good or bad please post them so i can make my next story better.
Brian's Tale - Chapter 3: A Psychic, A Tearful Parting and A Promise
The two trainers talked about various topics, brian being told a few pointers and some amusing stories about his mom. after a while, they left for a hotel.
Summer Adventures Part 4
Ok that was part 4 for your enjoyment all constructive criticism is welcomed and any pointers by veteran writers will be much appreciated.
Farming with dragons
Company and warmth pressing our bodies closer to each other "i love you symphony" "i love you too mark" maybe we shou- she cut me off shhh "just hold me" thank you guys for reading it means a lot if you could please give me feedback on this i need pointers
Aion's Rebirth - Magical Curiosity
The professor was in her zone, twin tails bobbing almost as fast as mine were as she used her pointer on the blackboard.
Catherine's Private Training
There was just no way that this rabbit that was crying out in sheer ecstasy seconds ago was giving her pointers now! catherine shook her head in disbelief, but coach hart was already picking herself up and brushing herself off.
Fathom's Phantoms, Ch 13: Belonging
The pointer shrugged, standing up before finishing his coffee with one swig. "eh... find one an' you'll find th' other... if not, then we've got other problems."
Monkey's Beach Bunny Betty pt 1: b-ball bites!
He tries to take it. i moved it away from him, dribbled it behind my back and shoot it w/ my tail, and made a 3 pointer. 100 secs on the clock, or time watch for this matter. "ok, no more playing fair!"
A day with Quinn (NSFW)(Quinn and Noah) part 3 (finale)
I'll take that laser pointer." quinn pointed at a pocket sized laser pointer available for 5 tickets. “uhmm… that all?" noah asked, awkwardly. “yeah, it looks pretty cool." quinn says.
The Norvogariam Records, Part Three: A Man and His Dog
Rikki looks unconvinced and colson isn't sure what has gotten into the gray furred pointer. a single wolf is certainly nothing to worry about.
Brooding
Jenny popped open the lid and stuck her pointer finger into the gel all the way. she then transfered the covered finger to her ass and wiped a little on the opening.
New Family: Chapter 3
Lucas, no longer affected by the laser pointer, jumped on scott's stomach and pinned his arms down. "that wasn't funny!" he yelled, trying hard not to laugh himself. "oh, come on, it was a harmless joke," scott said.