After the Storm - Part 24 [The Visitors]
However, inspiration struck and i thought that i could improve the chapter, so i decided to revise it.
Chapter IV: Secrets in the Water
**first revision (4/17/13):** it's taken over three years, but i've finally updated the original. this will be the last chapter to undergo a serious revision, as i'm pretty satisfied with the recent ones.
A Weekend Visit pt.1
Twenty minutes later, i was almost just about finishing up with my second revision of her paper. i laced my fingers together and stretched, leaning far back in the chair as i did.
Organized Crime- Chapter 1
Huge thanks to the help i received from draugr on my revisions :d enjoy, please comment as feedback helps me to become a better writer.
Control Freak
To revise the hell out of that, and now here is the watered-down version of that revision, which i decided was too violent.
#25 - Saddled With An Unstabled Partner
So long as it's legal, they'll approve it, and since he revised the marriage laws to allow for _'nonstandard partnerships'..."_ **neal:**"but...the horse is his excellency's property! how can this... _what?_ and what are these other papers?
Training session
#21 of stories a thing i wrote for someone that i thought i would have to revise multiple times to get their characters right but i got it in one so that's nice (edit note, never actually gave this a title before or after finishing it until now) it was training
a wolf and a vixen in love revised as a series
Just want to make one thing clear i own the rights to this story and i have revised it .blah blah anyway without any thing else to say i give you a wolf and a vixen in love chapter 1 it was a beautiful sunday morning ,and the young vixen was lying
The Lab: A Vore Adventure (Nov 2017)
[change] when being swallowed, another key press is required to actually move to "inside (predator)" [change] zsaarr's look at text lightly revised for typos and clarity. [change] paragraphs should always/mostly have breaks now.
Desperado: Introduction
I'm only going to upload the introduction first and see what people say about it before i (probably) revise the other chapters. everything i've written so far seems devoid of something, so please tell me your likes/dislikes, or any suggestions you have.
"Daggers of Darkness" - Prologue
#6 of daggers of darkness, book 1, into the black here's the (revised) prologue for the first book of my sci-fi adventure series, "daggers of darkness, book 1, into the black".
Chapter 3: How long?
I decided to pick this up again after so long i've likely skipped some details that should be carried on from the last chapter but i don't know if i'll be writing much soon so on and off let's call this the un-revised version that if it gets somewhere i'll