Jizz Part 2
#3 of jizz part 2 of jizz after some refinement.
The Dark Streets - Reboot Preview
A pair of shined oxfords completed the outfit, the man himself the very image of refined taste and carrying an air of immaculate nobility. "pardon, sir, but the guest has arrived a tad early. he is in the study."
Yedmichi's Tail (first draft) Prologue
If i get good comment and help refining my writting maybe i'll actually write it out fully. this i should note was only a first attempt. i'm super rusty at writting. but maybe with help i could be better.
The Anthro Girl: Chapter One
Her hair was one of her most appealing features; it was short and red with soft pointy tips, but it had a refined look to it, like the appearance of a polished oak desk.
The Old Violin
"3 dollars, i want to learn how to play myself," a refined-looking tiger dressed as a southern gentleman said, after a long pause.
Colour Me In
Would refine it later on. enjoy the song and the story for now. colour me in he didn't like this. he just couldn't like it. in fact, the raptor hated it. he hated his fears, his paranoia, and most of all, he hated her.
2:1 A Necessary Action
His taste was refined enough that his sense could pick out the lesser variety. if that was the case, he wouldn't have bought the bottle, which he had. then if it wasn't cheep, maybe it was the way was it had been fermented.
St. Louis Blues
It was here that this young woman of 20 lived with her parents after graduating high school, waiting for her the right tom-cat to give her nights of love and all the things that a refined southern lady would expect and treat her like a woman.
Goo TF
The bird, leuphe, stepped slowly into the cave and looked around, his eyes adjusting to the dark and noting how refined everything was. doors closed behind him, and mysterious chandeliers atop the high roof lit up, giving the stone walls a warming glow.
Izon vs. Tikana 2
The sight of pure, refined eroarcana being used leaves her and the others in the room transfixed. "this is what i'm studying," tik tik says. "this is what it can do to people."
A princely apology (prologue)
I'll refine this and make the smut part later on. constructive criticism for improving my writing is greatly appreciated! "absolutely not!" bellowed the elder, olivian's father.
Rising Anew-Chapter 9, part 1-
"your naturally skilled at using your instincts narcenac, but you lack any refinement." the voice was deep and smooth. like a deep warm natural spring. "who are you?!