Dragon Harem (Reboot) Chapter 3: The New Police Force
They could name their terms, and they said that they would re-write the laws, that they would have the power to do what they wanted with our laws. we said yes, but perhaps we didn't quite understand what they meant."
Carnival Hearts Chapter 2
#4 of carnival hearts mal crosses paths with her old crush, who (with the re-writing of the town's collective memories) is now mallory's best friend growing up.
Loyalty
Some of you may recognise this one already; that's because this is actually a re-write of an older story of mine, adapted for the comic soon to begin production by [mystery artist] ;) i've changed the species of one of the characters, tidied it up and
WHAT IF.. we know what a 'umamusume' is?
Hormonal trigger: the system "boots up" during puberty (estrogen-gate), re-writing the bone density and muscle composition. 3.
Liaisons, part 2
#6 of casino nights this chapter has had the most significant re-writing so far. i went back corrected a few things, but most importantly- i added some new scenes that are important to the upcoming chapters.
Revaramek the Resplendent: Chapter Seventy Three
Lovro wanted the pup to re-write his peoples' story, and that was exactly what vakaal was doing. first, he had one more stop to make. the rooms vakaal wanted to reach were on one of the upper floors.
A Dragon's Dance, Part 2
This one isn't quite a re-write. it seemed the perfect opportunity to flesh out some interactions between dragon and rider, and... okay yeah slit day came up and i wanted to do toothless slit stuff. so a fully new chapter! happy slit day 2022!
Revaramek the Resplendent: Chapter Seventy Four
He snatched at those stories with his mind, struggled to heal them, tried to re-write them so they wouldn't make such terrible choices. but the worlds were already burning.
Masquerade Doll
I'm not entirely happy with how it came out, mostly that the majority of the really good bits happen out of focus, but it's a flaw in the concept, and it was either re-write it or accept that it isn't perfect and let it go.
Carnal Saga, Tyrgerian Dropship
I just felt like dropping in for a bit and giving you part of a story (more a teaser), before i submit the rest of this story along with all the re-written stories of before (more editing, but some may need a re-write).
A noob roleplay about dragons. Hurray!
I mean cuddling, yeah dragons cuddling... a lot... snickers translating this was a nightmare, google translator didn't help at all so i had to re-write entirely from spanish to english. but finally its done!
Digging in the Dirt, part 3
One of things i did in this re-write, was to expand on a number of scenes. one of the reviewers said that the chapter could do with more detail and description.