The Game is Afoot (A2, B1, C7)
I rush through the 2nd to a degree so i can get through the re-write then do all the fine tuning revisions later on. i can't wait to get the re-writes all done so i can have a professional editor touch this up and then i can publish it. anyway, onwards!
The Warlock: Re-Written
So, instead of whining about it, i decided to re-write it for myself, keeping all the details i could remember exactly the same (except, now the woman is a fox, literally).
The Line (Roger and Julie part 6)
After looking at it for quite a while and re-writing parts it just seemed to keep getting worse. so i'm giving up and posting it so i can move on.
Divided Unity (Edition 3, Chapter 10)
Anyway, i want to go back to edition 1 and re-write it, since it's terrible and i want to improve it on it.
Thicker: Chapter Fifteen
The stag smirked victoriously, although it was hard for him to concentrate, having to go back to re-write portions of the text over again to smooth out the typos.
Saga of the Secretary 2: Changing Bodies
How difficult was it to re-write bits of her mind?" "surprisingly easy, particularly around the libido boosting parts. we barely had to do anything on that." "...what?"
Worshipping the Stud
An absolute pleasure to write and challenging with re-writing to include they/them (which will be uploaded come sunday). hope you guys will enjoy both versions and please be respectful of both commissioners and characters in this instance!
Only now, does it snow...
. <3 yey, i has no talent. c; re-write of , constructive criticism is a must! --- the clock of st.
The Silver Dragon (Revisited)
#2 of the silver dragon _well i looked back and felt that the first story needed a little work as i rushed it :p and i ended up re-writing the entire thing! so enjoy! and i'll be working on the next chapter soon! thanks for reading!
The Mason Family Secret (REWRITE)-Part 1
#19 of pre-2011 stories this is a re-write of a story i did back in 2007 called "the mason family secret" (this will be part 1 of at least 2 parts).
Thoughtless Destruction
, but i may re-write this in the future. with a satisfied rumble, the dragon stomped through the city without a care in the world. the tallest skyscrapers only reaching his calves, thunder felt on top of the world.
Coell 2 - Factory Reset
They hadn't touched her mind and core programming, it was far too complex to simply re-write what they needed from scratch.